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Basia (667)


Basia (667)
Photo Information
Copyright: Richard Juneau (richardj7) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 95 W: 8 N: 79] (591)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-11
Categories: Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS-1D Mark II, Canon 24-70mm F2.8 L
Exposure: f/11, 1/50 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): My favorite portraits, I :::Polki:::Polish Girls::: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-03-15 21:20
Viewed: 2960
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My favorite model, Basia. Retouched lips, eyes (whites, and contours). I like this nice and relaxed pose.
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Hi Richard
Very nice shooting.Perfect eyes and hair.Very nice white bacground..

Kerem

Hi Richard,
I like the pose too. I like the photo. The lights and delicate shadows. Very nice POV. White background helps in focusing on Basia. tfs

Marek

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2006-03-15 21:46]

Nice lighting, pose, and clarity Richard. Well done. B

Good photo
TFS
v.

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  • eev Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 110 W: 53 N: 45] (1291)
  • [2006-03-15 22:19]

Richard.. very well done..I am curious to know what you did here.. perhaps if you posted a ws with the original and explained your technique that would help us see what you did.

Bonjour Richard!

Bravo ! Superbe portrait. Éclairage, pose , POV, DOF, et modèle tous TOP niveau ! (^_^)

Robert

Beautiful model on a very good pose. This is very nice composition and the lighting is perfect. Not that appealing would be her feet, could've been a little bit tilted or lowered or you could've do a PP to clean-up the dark spots.

hi Richard
ce portrait est A1
bravo! et merci de l,avoir partagé

Y'a des fois comme celle la, ou je n'ai simplement rien a redire! Bravo! Bon éclairage, belle émotion... superbe!

hi Richard,

I like it. very much!

Such detal.

Well done!

TFS.

Technical perfection. That is boring technical perfection. Sharpness, accutance, and stuff.
She's not relaxed. Her head is suspended in the air.
It hurts after few seconds of posing.
No wonder her eyes and mouth ask: Did you finish yet?
You've made her short (fatal perspective!)
Is that her belly between the folds of her blouse?

George

You have the studio. You obviously have the proper equipment. You have the beautiful models (Polish girls,eh?). It's the time to kick the audience in the teeth.
Do it Richard Juneau. Wake us up!

This is a wonderful portrait. the light is perfect.
Well done

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2505 W: 368 N: 2626] (11966)
  • [2006-03-16 16:44]
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There's more to like about her than this pose, Richard ;o).
Beautiful model, nice pose indeed, well captured.
One little nit-pick: above her upper lip there's a white shine, I think it would have looked better if you had used a burn brush there.
Anyway, TFS.

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  • ruudblok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1845 W: 727 N: 2259] (23329)
  • [2006-04-15 2:19]

This is top class work with a top class lady
RuudBlok

Fantastic portrait. Excellent processing. Very beautiful model.

Another beautiful portrait. Kudos to you and Basia. She's beautiful!

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