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Sunset on Desert


Sunset on Desert
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Copyright: Atul Gurung (tbgur219) (0)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-05-10
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-08-18 14:27
Viewed: 2161
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
When i went for desert safari, i got a chance to take this picture
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  • tribord Gold Star Critiquer [C: 85 W: 91 N: 296] (895)
  • [2011-09-15 7:22]
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Welcome on TL Atul,

Good try for a first post. There are plenty of ways of taking a picture, so are the ways to look at a picture.
The good points on your picture are the light, the foreground still visible (not too dark and not too clear).
The "weak" points are the image is too centered. Both the vegetation and the sun are right in the middle of your shot. There is also a slight tilt on the left, the horizon line is not exactly straight (but this may not be a major problem).
As I said this is my point of view, there are differents ones.

Take your time and think about "what", "how" and "why" you want to take a particular picture...
Enjoy your time here, share pictures and words. Regarding other's pictures and critiques may also be helpful for your own improvement, as it as always been for me here.
Enjoy the site.

I added a cropped version of your picture to show you different possibilities. This is just a hint, not a rule. See the workshop section for that.

Friendly,

Damien (point system turned off, as it is a useless function)

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