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The Beauty and The Deep


The Beauty and The Deep
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Copyright: Suzy Gitana (suzy) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 420 W: 36 N: 1214] (4355)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-09
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.5
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-10 0:27
Viewed: 1214
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"Underwater"

You and I,
Are here, underwater
Seconds are so dear, underwater
Searching for a light, to draw me closer
I hold my breath in tight, bring me closer
I feel your touch, will you pull me up again?

It's not so bad down here, underwater
Once you get past the fear, underwater
Since you through the haze, it's like a memory
I've been down here for days, have you seen me?
I feel your touch; will you pull me up again?

It's all the same for me, underwater
There's nothing much to see, underwater
I cannot make a sound, but I can listen
I can't tell up from down, now I'm listenin'
I feel your touch, will you pull me up again?
You're just in sight, will you save my life again?

You and I are here, underwater

(Underwater) by: Vertical Horizon


It’s funny when we are surrounded always by beauty and it’s just right there in front of us but for some reasons sometimes we just don’t see it! My Aquarium and my little old friends, shot this last night! I always look at it but I never saw it that beautiful and deep till hours ago so I decided to carry it here for you… I did some editing and cropping and sharpening, and I cloned a small area on the top to avoid a solid line that separates the reflection and the clear water… (Wanted to flow without fences) was thinking maybe I start my 1st workshop and show the real one… je ne Sais pas :)
PS: this is... my Aquaurium, am Big fan of Fish:)

So welcome to the underwater world, hope you enjoy your stay and plz don’t forget to write your comments and critiques before you leave :)

Thank you anyway…. And my deepest wishes!

manujmehta, burak28, piccolina, azaf1, jazrr, Dot, gnada, tanburi, mbrito, brunorsantana, trekks has marked this note useful
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To claudees: The Underwater worldclaudees 3 03-10 11:32
To Janone: :Dsuzy 1 03-10 05:21
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hello Suzy
how are you doing?
wonderful subject
the water is so clean? earlier i thought that how these fish are in the air? hehe hehe
thank for sharing this interesting image

regards
Manuj MEhta

Hi Suzy,
What a superb image vith excellent colours andlighting.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hi Suzy
Impressive job
Amazing details and effects
Great note
Thanks
Burak

Hi Suzy,

the first thought that came on my mind when I saw this image was...this scene looks like Atlantida. :) World long lost and now found again.

Yes, but you are right...sometimes beauty can be found all around us and we are just too blind or maybe just too ignorant to see it. But from time to time we do open up our minds and find it.

Great shot with splendid colours and wonderful presentation.

Have a nice day,

Stasa

Hello Suzy.
Lovely note (vers) you wrote.
Picture is very well taken and you did good work on it.
But eh.. captured at home ? Are you staying in Dubai ?
Best wishes from Jan

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 733 W: 61 N: 1257] (7137)
  • [2009-03-10 6:44]

Hi Suzy

I'm really happy to discover your gallery and this one is a real beauty. Well conceived as an idea and very well materialized it creates a unique impression. Very fine details and an excellent verse to combine it with.

Please accept my sincere compliments and best wishes for a creative life...
TFS
Argiris

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2009-03-10 6:45]

Hello,

Sacér auqurium, superbe ton image, quelle netteté et ces belles couleurs, depoisson aus milieu d'un palac, de toute beauté.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

The Beauty and The Deep of the underwater world, hope you enjoy your stay and plz don’t forget to write your comments and critiques before you leave :) tfs. But where was this pic shot? A small note would be helpful.

Hi Suzy,
wonderful idea and shot.
Good note,
I like how you think.
Great colours and contrast.
Good sharpness.

Vlatka

very very interesting image.
the poetry has made it much more meaning ful.
BIG THANKS for sharing.
God bless.

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 77 N: 98] (2228)
  • [2009-03-10 9:19]

Hi Suzy:

Very nice composition.
I like the background.
Beautiful colors and details.

Regards,
Jafar

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 854 W: 5 N: 1570] (6756)
  • [2009-03-10 12:27]

Hi Suzy!

Wonderful details and effects,nice idea,Great colours and contrast.
Compliments and TFS
Kostas

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2009-03-10 16:56]

dear Suzy,
the couple fish sing,
at a silent deep bottom of the ocean, we met,
no one knows our love.
from a blue surface of the sea, the light comes,
no one knows this shining world.
colors are more vivid than on the water,
and all are preserved well quietly,
then only our love is burning in it.
thank you,
Akihisa

Olá Suzy.
Nice aquarium that you have. Thats true.. the most part of time we seek the beauty everywhere, but we forget to look to the inside of our world. The objects that surround us are so near, that we cant see them.
Congratulations
sergio

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2009-03-11 7:33]

HI Susy
I get the impression you found the lost city.
Very impressive distortion and water movement
Great pp and thanks for the underwater view.
Dot

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2009-03-11 7:46]

Hi Suzy...

Wonderful and interesting scene - nice shot...
Good not/story - nice natural colors, and contrasts.
I like your post, congratulations,
George

Hi Suzy,
Again you presented a really good artwork, interesting composition and good technique of putting the collage together. Moody photo indeed. Keep up these nice contributions! TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

Hello Dear friend Suzy,
Underwater is a mysterious world. I have an aquarium full of chiclid fishes.
Thanks for nice poem
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2009-03-12 5:57]

Hello Suzy
original POV and a wonderful capture, very well composed, with great clariry, sharpness and contrast, and fantastic colours. The effect is superb. Great work; is like to find a lost civilization under the deep sea.
Best regards, mb

Ciao Suzy, superb underfwater capture with fantastic colors and excellent sharpness, very well done, ciao Silvio

Wonderful scene, Suzy! Beautiful details!
Rich composition. Great idea and well done!
Congratulations and TFS, dear friend.

Warm regards,
Bruno

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13344)
  • [2009-03-12 9:45]

Hello Suzy.
Nice one. Fish world.
With interesting bacground.
Beautiful!
Regards
Janek KLoss

Hello Suzy! Original idea and very sophisticated art work. Good luck!

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2009-03-31 5:08]

hi Suzy

The shot is nicely done without any effect of flash reflection on the glass and the backdrop provided is very interesting as if to imagine this in Greek or Roman setting. Although the cloning work does show a bit of smear on architecture and columns with some twist of lines, it can be understood why you wish to do it.

Good work.

tfs, bill

"I've been down here for days, have you seen me?"

Très bien fait mon amie et une netteté surprenante ; toutes ces couleurs du décor et ces formes antiques sont un enchantement.
Be always happy
Henri

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