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a couple of flamingos

a couple of flamingos
Photo Information
Copyright: efser unsal (efi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 11 N: 211] (3730)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-01-27
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/8, 1/2000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): bodrum bodrum 2 TL [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2016-03-05 23:32
Viewed: 895
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
her kış başı flamingolar bodrum tuzla ya göç ederler.yanları sıra balıkçıllar da gelir.martılar da eksik olmaz çevrelerinden.
orada olabilmeleri çevre temizliğinin göstergesi olarak çok sevindirici..

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Hi Efser,
The flamingos look good against the lovely blue sky but the birds are too central,
Try cropping from the LHS and the bottom edge

Hi Efser

Please understand that this is my opinion only and is not meant to offend or annoy.

I think, in this photo, you were limited by your equipment. You used a focal length of 155mm and,because the file is only 33Kb, you have cropped the image quite a lot. Because you have cropped as much as you dare, there is a lot of space around the birds which has no interest. Also, as a result, the birds have little detail. You used pattern metering which has resulted in the long necks and faces being over exposed, which again has resulted in a lack of detail.

Sorry to be so negative, but, as I said, it's only my opinion as a keen amateur.

It does not take much to improve the dynamic aspect of the image. A simple twist to the left catches better the eye.(Workshop)

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