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behind the mask...


behind the mask...
Photo Information
Copyright: Sinem Era (Sin) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 2] (209)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-03-13
Categories: Artwork, Mood
Camera: Sony DCR-TRV50E
Exposure: f/2.5, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-14 4:47
Viewed: 2628
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In the world, we believe that human being has our own way. We think that we has experinced our own choices. But sometimes we understand or fell real world that completely voiceless. In that times, if we deeply listen ourselves, find own touchiness. It is so precious..

I tried to tell my touchiness that I had refused for along time. now it is not time of silence, now it is the time that acquiesce and release my feelings...

Hope you like it...

Sin

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To Fortuna: hiSin 1 02-20 11:54
To elena_r: hi Elena,Sin 1 06-14 06:36
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Hi Sinem.
Welcome on TL. I hope you'll have fun here. This first pic is great. I'm already waiting to see more job from you.
IMHO the light could have been less direct. I mean that and indirect light could have induce a bit of shadows on her left side (right side of the pic). This implies often a more mystic mood.
That is my feeling.
Thanks to share

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  • vheus Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 7 N: 25] (251)
  • [2005-03-14 4:53]

what a wonderful shot,
symmetry, details, thinking are beautiful...
nothing to say....
strong, meaningful, deep photo...
thank you and,
bravo sinem...

Magnifiquement réussi ce portrait. Cadrage très bon ainsi que le choix du noir et blanc. Bravo et bienvenue sur TL, Sinem. Dommage qu'il manque une petite note. Amitié, Patty.

Sinem hanım, aramıza hoşgeldiniz...Gerçekten çok hoş bir portre çalışması...Makyaj ise kusursuz bir hava katmış fotoğrafa...Paylaşımınız için teşekkürler...

Can

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 24] (14)
  • [2005-03-14 6:39]

Welcome to TL Sinem. What a lovley first post. You captured a lovley atmosphere by teh tranquility of your model. Lovley structure of teh skin and a personal and up close view.

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2005-03-14 12:27]

Great shot to start with. Very thoughtful and mystical. Grainy texture really nice on this portrait. I personally like your lighting, but maybe you can also try with a relector just below her chin to send some defused light back under the chin slightly. Well done

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1314 W: 11 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-03-14 13:39]

Silence...... a title very well chosen.
The portrait is really nice, well composed, maybe the light is some bright, but the pose and expression of your model makes it all good. The look of the eyes is very calm.... silence, nice done and it's your first picture, welcome here, Sinem !

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  • tommy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 28] (202)
  • [2005-03-14 14:52]

Great expression on the model and very interesting makeup. I like the POV and a fitting frame that you attached to this. Good job, congrats

Welcome! Nice first photo! A note about the photo would be great. I like the face painting. It kept this photo from become a typical portrait of a beautiful girl. You composition is great. It is very nice! JP

Real goog shot...she look sad!

Hello! Welcome on TL!
Excellent B&W! it's very cool!
She have interesting makeup... Posture and closeup are well done!

Çok , çok güzel.

bakışlardan gözümü alamadım baya bi baktım
tebrikler

I like it ,very nice very nice ,very good work and crop .Very well done ,Sinem.All the best .Thanks .
Elena

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  • zapcom (2257)
  • [2007-02-27 3:42]

cok orjinal bir calisma olmus tebrik ederm

Merhaba Sinem,

Just lovely portrait, just beautiful woman, just great look.
Selamlar
Sergio

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