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beautiful door


beautiful door
Photo Information
Copyright: dilek alpay (dilekdile) (68)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-23
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-27 3:51
Viewed: 1549
Points: 7
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To Karyn674: Yes, you did a good job.dilekdile 1 05-28 00:13
To esentuna: Teşekkürler.dilekdile 1 05-28 00:00
To chendis: Thanks...dilekdile 1 05-27 23:58
To ayse51: teşekkürlerdilekdile 1 05-27 23:50
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Hello Dilek,

This is an amazing sculpted doorway, I can also notice the restoration process, by replacing some of the stones in the arch.

This picture has such a potental! It is an amazing work of art!

I did a worshop for you to give you my vision, its not correcting yours, just a different visual.

The only things that don't seem right to me are:
I see the picture crooked to the left, I checked it out but it seems to be the actual structure, so I rotated the picture to the right and croped tighter to minimze the impact.
I desaturated the stone to enhance the stone carving texture.

Have a look and let me know, hope it is to your liking!

Regards

Merhaba Sevgili Dilek,
öncelikle aramıza hoş geldin.Mardin den nefis kapı süslemeleri.Ellerine sağlık.Tebrikler.Necla.

Dilek Hanım merhabalar,

Kompozisyonunuz çok hoş. Kapının işlemeleri gerçekten çok mistik görünüyor. Umarım ben de bir gün Mardini ziyaret etme fırsatı bulurum, çünkü oraya dair gördüğüm fotoğraflar gerçekten etkileyici.
Elinize sağlık
Emel :)

Hi Dilek!
impressive architecture with wonderful details
grate work!

Oana

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