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Autumn symphony


Autumn symphony
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Copyright: necla erikci (ayse51) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-08
Categories: Nature, Macro
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-02-11 8:12
Viewed: 1607
Points: 61
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Yaprak Tıkırtıları

Mevsim sonbahar olunca
İntihar eden yapraklar gelir akla
Salmış kendini asfalta
Bile bile ezileceğini ayaklar altında
Veya bir tank paletinde
Son canı çıkar hışırtılı
İnadına eser kavgalı olduğu rüzgar
Her damlasında yağmurun
Şımarık bir izi kalır
Yalandan öte geçmez kaldırımlar
Ezilirler beraber
Mazgallarda ölü yaprak cesetleri
Koşarlara denizlere
Gülerler
öpüşürler.

Şairini bilen varsa lütfen eklesin...

roges, Saba, hay_kes, inaam, jjanczyk, chrisJ, boreocypriensis, mushtaqhussain, Fortuna, harpya, solrac has marked this note useful
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Hi Necla.
Wonderful composition,very pleasant and nice to look at it.
Nice image.Well done.
Best regards.Alin.

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-02-11 8:19]

Hi Necla,
A real symphony of Autumn colors!
A wonderful capture of these colorful foliage!
Great use of shallow DOF!
Glorious lighting and a nice POV!
Very neat presentation.
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Merhaba Necla,

I like this composition with such golden colored leaves, as if they are enjoying a wonderful time in a colorful world!

Nicely maintained sharpness, perfect POV and a shallow DOF, all are doing their magic in this capture. Well done!

best wishes,
Paras

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 0 N: 886] (8448)
  • [2010-02-11 9:08]

Hi necla,

I like the sharpness and texture of the foliage color in autumn, a very good focus and excellent image. With a superb B / G, a composition full of freshness. Great job.
Good evening.
john

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-02-11 9:16]

Hello Necla :)

This composition looks with lists beautifully
in autumn colours and on dark background
Splendid colours, contrast as well as light.
Very showy, it pleases me.

With best wishes.
Barbara

Dear Necla
fabulous foliage display.
nicely cropped, composed and framed.
amazing golden tones with beautiful bg colors.
good adjustment of light and contrast.
greetings
tsilla

Hi Necla
Very nice and original composition,wonderful vibrant colours,good lighting and contrast.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

Merhaba Necla Hanım,
Farkında olmadan sizin gibi sonbahardan bir kare yüklemişim am sizi kareniz daha estetik ve çekim kalitesi daha yüksek.Elinize sağlık.
Selamlarımla..

hAyAti

Merhaba Necla, fascinating composition with fantastic autumnal colors, great foicus and wonderful light, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2010-02-11 10:51]

Merhaba Necla,
Your composition is beautiful. The tanning leaves are looking gereat in dynamic perspective, well done.
Thanks for sharing.

Hello Necla,
Fantastic composition!
Perfect sharpness, lovely colors, nicely blurred background.
TFS

I like it, great sharp warm colours... nice shot... woow!

Galder

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-02-11 19:33]

dear Necla,
beautiful colors and forms in autumn itself,
mellow yellow and brown of autumn leaves, and
settled back green and blue are singing autumn light,
an artistic photo work, thank you,
Akihisa

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-02-11 19:59]

Hi necla

Nice use of a shallow dof, with good sharpness, color & framing on the dried fern fronds. Tfs!

Merhaba Necla hanım,

Yumuşak ışıkla nefis ve derinlikli bir çekim.
Sonbahar renkleri ile yazı özleten bir kare:)
Elinize sağlık.

Bayram

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2365 W: 178 N: 0] (32781)
  • [2010-02-11 23:20]

Morning dear Necla ;)))
I agree...photo with sounds...TFS
Have a nice WE,
J ;)))

Hello Necla,
Wonderful texture of these beautiful autumn leaves with amazing POV,the lighting condition and good exposure makes it an elegant artistic shot,well captured and nice shallow depth,well done.
TFS,
Have a nice day,
Mushtaq Hussain

Hello Necla,
Beautiful! Nice sharpness, wonderful colour saturation.
best wishes,
Achim

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-02-12 11:22]

Merhaba Necla,
beautiful autumn scenery. Superb colors and details.
Even be here in autumn and winter than two months with snow and cold.
Excellent POV to use, congratulations.
Have a beautiful evening,
Adrian

P.S. I hope you like the picture that you have dedicated it.

Merhaba Necla Hanım,
Geçen sonbahardan kalma estetik bir kare...
Derinlik ve detaylar gözalıcı. Kutlarım.
Selamlar,sevgiler.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hello Necla,

Excellent shot with great light, nice colors and textures.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Merhaba Necla,
Olarak sonbaharda gölgeler ugy arka planda salonun mektup bağlıdır. Şiir seçimi iyi.
Well, Selamlar ...... done
Sandor

Bonjour Necla.
Des belles couleurs pour présenter ces feuilles de fougère en fin de saison.
La luminosité est aussi très belle et met en valeur cette composition.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-02-14 2:12]

Hello,

sueprbe imae sur ce fougères, quelle couleurs dorée merveilleuse, ce lumières, la présentation es parfaite, sueprbe compo.

Meric et amaitié

Nicou

Hello Necla! Nice leaves. Nice lightness and brightness. Good composition. Very good focus. Original exposure. Splendid effect. Well done!

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-02-15 5:13]

Merhaba dear Necla!
Splendid autumnal image and perfect title.
The warm colours and the lighting are fantastic.
Excellent DOF and perfect presentation.
ciao! Vanda

Ciao Necla,


The pin sharp details are impressive!
Well done on the macro work here, and the colours are well reproduced in the fine light...
DoF spot on makes the subject stand out well on the background!

Greetings,

Sergio

Hello dear Necla!

Nice and vivid shot. Beautiful details and contrasts. What if you had taken the shot from a little higher POV to have the leaves more in focus.

TFS, indeed nice thought!

Best Regards,
Ali

hi necla
lovely autumn shot of this fern,excellent dof and good detail,good colours.
regards
jimmy

Necla Hanım,
Güzel bir bakışla yakalanan kompozisyon.
Renklerin ahengi çok hoş.
Tebrikler.
Sağlıklı günler.
Ataman

Hola Necla
Bella sinfonia otoñal con unas texturas fantasticas y muy naturales ,color y luz muy acertadas que resaltan sobre el fondo oscuro ,gracias por compartir

Buen trabajo
un saludo
Carlos

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