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Snow Flakes


Snow Flakes
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Copyright: necla erikci (ayse51) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-01
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-02-06 2:21
Viewed: 2088
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 84
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Have a nice weekend to everybody.


Kar Taneleri

ellerinden yağardı
en güzel yalanından dünyanın
bedenimde titreyen kar taneleri

hangi sevişme bir vedadan daha uzundur
nedir ki aşk çağımızda bir merhabadan başka?
demiştin ya, aşk
kış yorgunluğu gibi yürürken aramızda

bir merhaba yeterdi güneşi ısıtmaya

gecenin gömdüğü gümüş bir yıldız gibi
mermer bir unutuşun mücevherine
bağışladım kar sesini
yüreğinde
donup kalmış kışın merhametine

kurudu bir içdeniz, güneş çekildi
bir mevsim gözlerini bırakıp gitti
kar kokan bir rüzgarı çıkarıp sandığından

derken bir 'merhaba' sildi kendini
içimdeki ülkelerin haritasından

gecenin gömdüğü gümüş bir yıldız gibi
öyle sevdim ki, unuttum sevmeyi
bağışlamaz beni artık hiçbir hatıra

Ayten Mutlu

chrisJ, parasbhalla, roges, cunejo200, walk33a, Fortuna, mushtaqhussain, brunorsantana, Saba, jjanczyk, boreocypriensis, harpya, mvdisco has marked this note useful
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Bonjour Necla.
Une image de saison bien composée avec ces feuilles mortes en avant-plan qui donnent un bon relief à la photo.
Les couleurs naturelles sont aussi très belles. Félicitations.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-02-06 2:41]

Hi necla

Fantastic warm cold colour contrasts, between the red & blue colours, with superb sharpness & framing. The snow enhances the graphism. I like the path at right, which adds good lead in lines. Tfs!

Merhaba Necla,

beautiful winter capture with great colorc contrasts, especially between the rust colored leaves and the freshly lying white snow!

Perfect sharpness and nice POV also enhance the beuty of this lovely work.

thanks and regards,
Paras

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-02-06 3:25]

Hello,

Fantastique image avec le feuille morte colorées qui resten encor sur l'arbe, cette calèche qui avanc dur la route neigeuse, sueprbe image et cpatage.

bravo et amitié
Nicou

Merhaba Necla,
Cozy winter image, the specific use of the horse tooth color. Very good picture.
Good poem chosen, congratulations.
Sandor

Merhaba Necla,

Beautiful composition.
Good chosen POV.
Excellent sharpness, light and colors.

Have a nice weekend my friend,
Tatjana

Hello Necla!
Very beautiful winter picture and excellent point of view!
Great colours, good sharpness!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-02-06 3:51]

Merhaba Necla,
again a magnificent picture.
What beautiful landscapes are the other side of the Black Sea!
I know only part of Romania. Now because you have and pictures from Turkey, thanks.
Have a wonderful day,
Adrian

Bonjour Necla

Très jolie photo de ce paysage hivernal avec cette superbe carriole rouge!!Peut-être le moyen le plus sur de transport sur ces routes enneigées...
Belle composition et belle lumière!
Bon week end
Catherine

Merhaba Necla
incredible winter scene.
the red leaves and carriage make an artistic image.
great contrast.
well seen and composed.
warm greetings
tsilla

Hi Necla,

The reds from the tree and the carousel are such eye poppers, they beautifully provide colors. You composed this impeccably, your exposure management is good as well. A lovely winterscape my dear.

Danilo

Hola Necla
Fantastica imagen que parece sacada de una obra de Dickens de Navidad ,buen encuadre color y luz ,una agradable composicion , felicidades

Buen trabajo
un saludo
buen fin de semana
Carlos

Merhaba Necla, fantastic winter view with splendid leaves in FG, lovely composition, greatperspective and splendid light, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Hi Necla!

This is so very nice. I think this is a great composition with the color of the leaves in the FG. Beautiful subjects! ...and winter scenes are my favorite. Very well done!

TFS
Dennis

Hello dear Necla!

WOW! So beautiful shot this one is. These autumn leaves as the FG are looking lovely and contrasting to the snow and the red color is looking so wonderful and attractive in this combination. Very very beautiful shot in great details and sharpness.

TFS, indeed a fabulous POV!

Best Regards,
Ali

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1797 W: 13 N: 1442] (15482)
  • [2010-02-06 7:39]

Hi Necla,
A lovely winter scene. The brown leaves add color to the scene. If not for the car, this photo would be timeless.
Sunil

çok güzel.
sanki herseyi tek tek elinler yerlestirmissin gibi basarili bir kompozisyon!
selamlar
ömer

Necla Hanım,
Hem kırmızı dalları
Hemde kırmızı arabayı beyazlar içinde nasıl buldunuz?
Harika bir renk uyumu,
Tebrikler.
Ataman

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2010-02-06 8:56]

HI Necla
I love the contrast of the old way of life and the new modern technology.
Great entry into the frame with all the white covered trees and the red leaves.
Dot

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2010-02-06 9:19]

Merhaba Necla...
Beautiful winter scene...
Beautiful composition...
Regards...
Andro

Merhaba Necla Hanım,
Sıradışı ve etkileyic bir kış manzarası.Elinize sağlık.
Selamlarımla..

hAyAti

Hello dear Necla,

Wonderful winter scene with beautiful colors, excellent perspective, lighting and contrast!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Hola Necla.
Precioso encuadre, hermoso colorido.
Ajustada exposición.
Saludos, JL

Harika bir görüntü, kurumuş yaprakların sıcaklığı çok etkileyici.. keşke arka plandaki araç orada olmasaymış diye düşündüm, bir de daha çok maviye eğilimli kar rengini düzeltmek amaçlı bir ws hazırladım, umarım beğenirsiniz, teşekkürler..

aK

Hi Necla,
Beautiful winter shot with superb POV and DOF,red leaves against white snow surrounding looks very moody,beautiful matching colors of red with red,great symbolic shot for a Turkish theme,well captured and beautiful presented.
Regards,
mushtaq

Beautiful image, Necla!
Lovely combination of red and white.
Well composed and I original title.
Congratulations and TFS :o)

Cheers,
Bruno

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2365 W: 178 N: 0] (32781)
  • [2010-02-07 3:52]

Beautiful winter view and mood...TFS
Selamlar dear Necla ;)))
J ;)

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-02-07 7:25]

Hello Necla :)

Splendid composition in winter scenery.
Beautiful colours and light, it pleases me very.
I congratulate realization...fantastic, miraculous effect.

I apologize for lack of points :{

With best wishes.
Barbra

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-02-07 8:12]

Hello Necla! Very beautiful image! Very well composed, technically good and a great quality post. Well done, I love the way the reddish leaves match the color of the wagon. Good work!

Mario

Hello Necla,
Very interesting winter shot!
Fantastic POV, perfect sharpness and excellent DOF.
Beautiful color tones.
TFS

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-02-07 8:30]

Hi Necla,
A very pleasant shot of this Winter scene!
Fabulous red leaves emerging from the white snow, balanced well by the canopy of the cart!
Nice lead-in road in the right of the perspective.
Great composition, a very peaceful one!
Very neatly presented.
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

HI Necla..nice shot...great winter tones and colors. Well done.

Roger

Hello Necla.
Nice way to walk and admire nature in winter,especially if you're really good dressed.
Best greetings.Alin.

Merhaba Necla Hanım...
Arabanın arkasından savrulan kar tozcuklarını
tahmin edebiliyorum..renkli,fantastic bir kış karesi.
Direnen kızıl yapraklar dinamizm katmış.Tebrikler..
Selamlar, saygılar..
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Sonbahar renkleri ile beyazın buluştuğu nefis bir enstantane.
Çok hoş bir bakış açısından çekmişsiniz Necla hanım.
Emeğinize sağlık.

Bayram

Ciao Necla


Indeed a very strong winter with a lot snow and frost.
You chose a very well angle we get great perspective and depth.
Sharpness and composition make these picture very atractive.

Have a nice day,

Sergio

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-02-12 17:12]

dear Necla,
the red of leaves and cart, in blueish white of snow, is excellent,
very fantastic scene, if the motor car would be not there, it may be quite a view in any romantic story,
thank you for your wonderful shot,
Akihisa

Hi Necla,
Beautiful presentation and composition,
wanderful with snow in the branches,
nice perpective and details,
great colors and light,
Compliments
Michel

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-02-15 5:18]

Merhaba Necla!
This picture is fantastic for me !! What a romantic scene!
Excellent POV and great perspective. Very beautiful the contrast between the red leaves and the white scenery!
Perfect framing.
Congratulations my friend.
Ciao! Vanda

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  • izida Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 1] (801)
  • [2010-02-16 6:40]

Merhaba Necla hanim,
Az da olsa portfoyunuze goz attim..Hepsi de birbirinden guzel.
Etkiliyeci buldum..
Emeginize saglik
Saygilarimla
Gulsen

Wow Necla, beautiful scene !!
The red against the white works superb.
Great composition.
Tfs
Joop!

very nice contrast red against the white very good compo.very beautiful snow.

tfs
cris(",)

Ciao necla,

your image has the spots of color to the just place.
Well done!

TFS
Saluti dall'Italia
bruno

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