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Dreams of winter...

Dreams of winter...
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Copyright: ren tom (ren777) (2)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-11-08
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/2000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-11-09 10:18
Viewed: 2316
Points: 2
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Your waking dreams
I hear your screams
Of the hour
My wilted flower

All alone
Canít go home
You must cower
My wilted flower

So much pain
Standing in the rain
You are not of power
My wilted flower

You run away
And there you stay
In the cold rain shower
My wilted flower

Memories of all the hate
Your horrible fate
They no longer tower
My wilted flower

In peace you die
I mustnít cry
Your last hour
My wilted flower

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Ola Ren. first at all welcome at TL. Good entry, with a good photo and a poem. That's a rarity and an interesting expectative.

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