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Photo Information
Copyright: Amir Aloosh (TheG1) (38)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-01-20
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-06 15:33
Viewed: 2941
Points: 3
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A closeup on sushi.
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To GabesterTL: WorkshopTheG1 3 07-19 04:50
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I like the arrangement and how the subject runs off the edges. I always enjoy repetition and filling of the viewing area. The pattern that the sushi makes is very nice. I am not much for sushi but I like this.

I like sushi, but either the top corner of the plate should have been in the frame, or the piece of table in the top right corner should have been cropped. The light is a little flat too and I think focus should have been a little closer.

I think you should work on the color balance so that the rice looks fresh & white. It looks kind of dull and gray and not so fresh. Otherwise it's a nicely composed shot -- I like it.

Looks delicious. I've tried a litte workshop based on the suggestions. If you like I will send it to you.

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