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Iran Motorcycle


Iran Motorcycle
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Copyright: Mukesh Srivastava (mukesh) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 672 W: 100 N: 467] (5062)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-20
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D200 Digital SLR, Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 DC EX HSM
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-06 0:11
Viewed: 2324
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In the street of Tehran.
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Hello Mukesh,
I like the general feel created by your colour treatment: it looks like a sequence of a road movie. You achieved this "feel" by making the textures and the play of light more important than the colours (except from the main subject of your picture, of course). Good compo as well, leading our eyes towards what might happen the next moment.
In other words: here, you are suggesting rather than showing. And it works...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 463 W: 66 N: 1002] (10432)
  • [2008-11-06 8:29]

In the street of Tehran it is usual scene that the bike is chained with shop door, well shot.

Hi Mukesh!

Very interesting catch!
Good point of view and composition!
Great colours and perfect old textures!
Just may be check the horizon line.

Best regards from Holland!
Edward

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  • Friso Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 4 N: 12] (147)
  • [2009-10-04 9:18]

Just browsed a bit in TL, searched for "city". Great picture, nice pp, a bit too much of a yellow cast for my taste, still very catching.

Rgds, Paul

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