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Almost Sunk

Almost Sunk
Photo Information
Copyright: Mohamad Ali Khourback (mak) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 27 W: 16 N: 26] (511)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2015-03-30
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D3200, AF-S DX NIKKOR 55-300mm VR, 58 mm UV
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2015-04-24 20:44
Viewed: 1474
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This boat was abandoned in a lake near our resident. It was going to sink actually and before that I tried to capture some photos and I came up with this one in B&W.
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Hi Mohamad Im glad you managed to capture this shot before it sank. What colour was the boat? I get that sinking feeling when I look at this :-)


Nice though in presenting this in B&W. It has reflected suitable feel.


Hello Mohamad! Wonderful black and white work. Good cut. Good contrast. Sophisticated effect. Well done!

Hi Mohammad

I'm afraid that, in my opinion, this some tonal range and is therefore a little flat. Also I think the composition is a little tight, the boat needs a little more space around it.

Hi Mohammad,
Nice choice of monochrome and the soft tones go well with the topic. Eventually it will make a small artificial reef for the fish. I do quite like the tight crop as well.

Ciao Mak!

Fine idea.
Fine image.
Good BW work.
Good contrast and sharp.


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