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Photo Information
Copyright: Lenka Matsoukatova (matsoukatova) (52)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-11-05
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/10 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-11-19 11:40
Viewed: 2051
Points: 3
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To rminkow: hey there.matsoukatova 1 11-22 13:31
To parasbhalla: thank youmatsoukatova 1 11-21 13:29
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Though I am not well at taking portraits but still I think this one is your strong sensual self-portrait, Lenka!

I feel this picture could be improved, as there are certain things which keep the surroundings too busy.
The doorway is cutting the one edge of the frame, is bit distracting too. The window (?) in the BG is also taking my attention which should not be the case.

Other than that, the picture is nice though a bit light could have enhanced the further quality of this shot.
Hope you don't mind.

Have a nice weekend.

Greetings,
Paras

PS: A short note will be appreciated as the viewer can learn and know the purpose and the idea behind taking this shot.

Hi Lenka..I did a workshop for you to look at. I like the shot. You have a beautiful body and it shows up nicely but the background is a bit distracting. I cleaned it up a little which gives more focus on your sillouette.

Roger

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