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I Miss You


I Miss You
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Copyright: Robert Smith (bobsmith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 360 N: 126] (1886)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2015-08-08
Categories: Daily Life
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-08-21 11:49
Viewed: 919
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'm always looking out for photography ideas, and this is one of them.
Park benches, Look at them and I see couples sitting on them. Both young and old. My idea is to have one person sitting at the bench missing a partner that has gone. Hence the title. This is a bit of an experiment, so I am keen to see any feedback for improving the story and image.

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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
  • [2015-08-21 22:52]

Hi Robert
I think that your idea is quite good and the result is interesting, although the scene is perhaps a bit dark, in my opinion.

tfs
Pedro

Bom dia Bob,
The sense of loss and melancholy is well narrated and especially accentuated by the use of BW.
I have nothing to suggest it not personal and not transferable moods.
Have a nice WE.
R.

This would look amazing in a cemetery!

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  • mak Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 27 W: 16 N: 26] (511)
  • [2015-08-23 0:08]

Hey Robert, the original photo itself is a nice shot and the idea you added to it is something new, I admire your imagination skills.

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