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Copyright: Steve Fry (suzley) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-10
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Lumix DMC G 3
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-11-14 9:14
Viewed: 983
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Fearful the swell, so gentle, kind.
Not the pulls of the moon which lovingly bind,
A thousand arms which wash the shore,
Clean from secrets of days before.

Fearful of the calm exterior,
A turquoise face superior
To all that wakes and eats and sleeps,
To all that in the dark night creeps.

Never trust from what you see,
The surface of a wolverine.
A sleeping demon, a raging beast,
Calling softly from the deep.


A sky that is ever changing as the clouds drift by.

Heavily edited to portray this emotion.

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1250 W: 106 N: 2911] (22323)
  • [2013-11-14 9:30]

Hi Steve,
Wow- now there's some mood ! Love your PP work- very creative and effective. TFS Julie

Hi Steve,
A real scary one at that. Great job!

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2013-11-14 10:38]

Hi Steve,
A very stormy atmosphere.
Very dramatic clouds covering the sky. I like the highlight on the water and the lit patches in the sky.
Very neat work.

Francis Xavier

salut steve,
une force nous tape à l’œille
belle présentation comme d'habitude

Ciao Steve, fascinating composition, superb sky, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

The image is very appropriate for the poem. Scary looking storm, if I were a mariner home is the best place. I like the contrast and the mood. Very well done, tfs.

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2013-11-14 19:30]


quel ciel un vrai mystère quelle compo et vue quel effet avec le brillant sur le plan d'eau et cette ouverture sueprbe captage et ensemble.
Bravo et amitié

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2013-11-14 21:43]

For sure I'm glad I'm inside by a warm fire,than out there on the sea in that stormy dramatic sky.Great PP work Steve,lots of mood attached to this compositionh.


Hi Steve, love that little patch of light in the distance. Looks a bit like things around here at the moment, storms every afternoon..Fiona

Hi Steve, I like this dark sky over the black sea......
Special mood, like candy for the eyes !!
Thanks to share it with us !!

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)
  • [2013-11-15 9:04]

Interesting dark mood in your photo, soon will be lightning, great job
regards Ryszard

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