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thourgh the arch


thourgh the arch
Photo Information
Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1008 W: 59 N: 1348] (12051)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-12
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Experimental
Camera: Nikon D90, Nikkor 50mm 1.8
Exposure: f/11, 1/200 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2012-01-06 13:29
Viewed: 1785
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
taken in Berwick on tweed just saw it a clicked shot in colour conveted to black and white with slight tone mapping
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Dear Bryan
A beautiful shot composed through the arch captured with good DOF and details while the B&W works well here.
Kind Regards
mushtaq

I really appreciate the mood of this picture with a bit of mystery. I did a WS with a darker area under the arch to allow the look escape to sea. Tell me what you think about ! ;-)
Kind regards
Jean

Hi Bryan
Excellent use of wall as your natural frame
Great black and white tone, a superb depth
Bravo
Alireza

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2953 W: 139 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2012-01-07 0:12]

Hi Bryan,
I like the HDR treatment to this B&W presentation.
Composition wise its excellent, captured through this archway. The distant lighthouse with that dark cloud formation is a beauty.
Good treatment and well presentated.
My best wishes,

Francis Xavier

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2012-01-07 0:37]

Hi Bryan
Your 'just clicked' shot is really good. The arch forms a nive frame for the wall and pathway that takes the eye to the beach and breakwater.
Good choice in using B&W and the pin sharp focusing and full range of greytones.
Yes, I like this very much
Dai

Hi Bryan

Superb tonal range & graphism although the workshop with more density is an improvement. Good sharpness & well seen & composed. Tfs!

Hello Bryan,a good composition making best use of the arch as a natural frame, so our eyes are guided out to sea and the lighthouse.
You have captured some lovely textures,which have probably been enhanced by the tone mapping.
Black and white was a good choice.
Tfs, regards Jean.

What a lovely catch from a well thought POV, Bryan!

Great color treatment to the picture and nice view through the arcade.
The sharpness and DOF are well done, and clarity is superb.
Well done!

Kind regards,
Paras

Hi Bryan, I like this shot with the lighthouse in the bg and the partial curve of road that you have to guess wether it leads to the lighthouse. Fiona

A nice composition of lines. The wall and the pavement edge create nice contrast with the brick wall on the left and the edge of the wall on the right. The slope of the wall is a strong compositonal factor and the end of the wall with the raised gatepasts lead the eye to the lighthouse. The hdr adds interesting contrasts. A very nice job.
regards
David

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