You were shooting in very difficult conditions, it seems - artificial light?
Composition isn't bad, I would have suggested you raise the camera just a little - less skin at the bottom of the pic and more hair at the top, which would move her eye into the "golden zone."
It would also remove the distraction of where her arm joins her torso, which, although potentially a subject in its own right for a bodyscape abstract, competes with her face as a dynamic structure within the frame.
A little more connection with her eyes would be good, just a slight turn of her head, perhaps?
Did you add the background yourself?
All of my pickiness aside, I do like the mood of this and I think Amber makes a beautiful model, kudos to you both.
Another beautiful portrait of Amber u've shared here :)
I like her profile, she very pretty :)
I Agree with Rew about the composition and add that u must have provided more space at the left side of frame.
Good one hope to see more :)
- urs0114 (6799)
- [2009-08-23 23:14]
Un bon cadrage serre bien composer pour mettre en valeur ce portrait.
La conversion en sépia et bien adapté a cette image,
Bravo pour ce bon job.
a nice picture, good pose and composition, nice tones. too bad the model is blured. just a bit more sharp would have been perfect
- nicou (50772)
- [2009-08-24 2:25]
encor un merveillkeux portrait superbe doucuer, quel travail et recherche, la position, cette doucuer, grandiose.
bravo et maitié
- taftabit (5787)
- [2009-08-25 10:01]
very nice sepia effect , great light and model
- milas (34114)
- [2009-08-27 2:08]
merhaba dear Mustafa...
very beautiful shot and detail...A superb colors and portrait...bravo..selamlar
- ramon (4058)
- [2009-08-28 2:48]
- Fortuna (72)
- [2009-09-07 6:57]
Pretty model and a very good shot!
Excellent light and contrast!
Congratulations and TFS
- burak28 (16810)
- [2009-09-24 3:11]
Wonderful capture and portrait
Great pose and composition
Have a nice days
- moli (13209)
- [2010-04-13 0:52]
Interesting pose here. Good idea presented. Nice soft-tonnes.
- Mamont (91)
- [2010-05-31 8:29]
This is an interesting photo. I like the composition and cropping. Nice simple colors. Maybe I’d like to see more of her eyes.
- ErikSven (3098)
- [2010-11-08 3:33]
I like the soft focus here, as well as the subdued skin colors that nicely contrast with the dark and almost even surface of the hair.
Good pose of your model and effective thight framing, enhancing the subtle sensuality your image conveys.
TFS & kind regards,