<< Previous Next >>

The Pier


The Pier
Photo Information
Copyright: kenny mcmurray (x-ray) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 38 W: 69 N: 3] (163)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2013-07
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2016-03-21 2:11
Viewed: 1012
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken on a wet windy day out in Llandudno liked the threatening sky and the emptiness of the pier. Shot on B+W film (Rollei retro 400 I think) using my 19-35 wide angle zoom.
Some dodging / burning some use of curves and some clarity added in PSP 16
Comments welcome

Reflex has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

I like the mood of the picture but not too much the colour, too much artificial for me. An other version in WS. Hope you like it!

Hi Kenny,
I do appreciate the WS done but I must add i do like the overall surrealistic appeal and the strong lines captured in and on the pier.
erwin...

Hi Kenny

I like this. I like the colour, the composition, the way the eye is led into the scene....I know the horizon is in the middle, but it works for me. Not keen on the noise though.

  • Good 
  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2016-03-21 17:44]

Hi Kenny,
A great PoV but I am afraid I am not keen on the colour or excessive noise in the sky, I think a normal B&W would look better buts that's just my humble opinion
Cheers
Jack

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF