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The first taste of chocolate

The first taste of chocolate
Photo Information
Copyright: david shackell (shackell) Silver Note Writer [C: 9 W: 0 N: 11] (152)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: CANON 7D, 24-105 4L IS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-08-14 3:40
Viewed: 1163
Points: 4
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Not posted in a while having spent a lot of time with our new family member sofia-rose. After 10 months she has finally tasted the luxury of the chocolate world and there is no stopping her.
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This photo is ignored since two days .... It's disappointing.
How lovely baby, adorable expression, I understand why you took this picture, a key moment, spontaneity and innocence.
I like the dark bg and the rendering of light and colors.
BUT -> I think that the use of the vignetting is awkward and I guess a wall in the backgroung.
Besides these details, it is a very lovely portrait of innocence and I wish many moments with chocolate to this young lady. (I love dark chocolate, I think it is the best chocolate).
She is so cute.

Very nice portrait. Attractive child looking straight at the camera. Good exposure values. The only criticism is with regards to the 2 shades of black which detracts from the shot.

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