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Lady in White


Lady in White
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Copyright: Robert Smith (bobsmith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 360 N: 126] (1886)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-10-08
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-10-13 14:21
Viewed: 1055
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Only my second session with a model, so I'm very keen to get any feedback, good bad and very bad.
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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 841 W: 26 N: 808] (9336)
  • [2016-10-13 15:25]

Hi Bob,
I like the white vignette, it works well, maybe a bit more contrast on the lady's face
cheers
Jack

Hello Bob

Like the softness of the image, maybe more of the bench erased from the image. Still the softness draws us in. nice

jimmy

What a beauties for a lady! with a little smile it could be plus nicer:-)
Indeed this amazing portrait deserve an excellent feedback BRAVO and do it again ROBERT SMITH

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  • x-ray Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 38 W: 69 N: 3] (163)
  • [2016-10-15 13:05]

Hi Bob,

Like the image, lighting seems to be very even, but if that is what was wanted then it works well, slight overblown highlight on forehead slightly distracting, but the vignette works well but watch the hand disappearing into vignette.
Well done on the whole a really pleasing shot

Kenny

I don't consider myself an expert on portraits but I like the shot and the effect of the vignette
regards David

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