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The discus thrower

The discus thrower
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Copyright: Jean Dwyer (jean11-3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1481 W: 0 N: 3257] (16374)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-05-13
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC TZ10
Exposure: f/3.7, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-06-08 9:13
Viewed: 994
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A close up of a sculpture of a Discus Thrower by the artist Roger Davies, entitled 'Discus'.
Made from mild sheet steel.

The artist says "I like the idea of being able to see through the piece of work.Each segment makes you think about the sculpture, where you can engage with the form, volume and ambiance of the work."

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Olá Jean,
It is a riveting sculpture undoubtedly, but not about her that I will comment critically.
I'll stick to your photo that I like quite the good light management, the balance of the composition.

Hi Jean,
A good tight crop with good sharpness and details of the sculpture as is the contrast to the green of the grass.

Ciao Jean, beautiful closeup, fine details, excellent clarity and splendid colors, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

Hi Jean you have captured the essence of the shot very nicely with your close but discerning crop. The artist has managed to capture movement which is no easy thing to do with sculpture.

Ciao Jean!

Interesting sculpture.
Good cut.
Very good contrast.
Superb sharp.



I like this pov which highlights sculpture and textures.
There is an interesting contrast rendition, I like your idea.

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