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Concentration
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Copyright: Robert Smith (bobsmith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 360 N: 126] (1886)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2016-06-07
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-06-22 12:58
Viewed: 1139
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A street busker on the streets of St Ives. I liked her concentration, and, of course, she's a very pretty girl. I thought the scene lent itself to being black and white.
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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 839 W: 26 N: 808] (9308)
  • [2016-06-22 17:53]

Hi Bob,
the white vignetting works well and good B&W tones
Cheers
Jack

Bom dia Robert.
Very good PPW. The pretty young model pop-out at white BG.
Good one.
R.

Hello Bob,
B&W definitely is a good choice. Excellent composition and exposure control. Well done.
Neels

Hi Bob , good choice on the b&w , I'm just trying to decide whether the missing hand bugs me or not..She looks like she is really feeling the music. Fiona

I enjoyed looking at your B&W image. I liked the composition, and how you captured her hair curving downwards, somewhat like the curves of her viola(?) -- or is it a violin.

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