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The girl and the fountain - II

The girl and the fountain - II
Photo Information
Copyright: Barbara Ll (barbi) (67)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-23
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-02-07 12:49
Viewed: 1355
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
The girl and the fountain.
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To Silvio2006: Graziebarbi 1 02-09 04:32
To RSK: Thank you!barbi 1 02-09 04:31
To tribord: Merci Tribordbarbi 1 02-09 04:30
To lavan: Thank youbarbi 1 02-09 04:28
To Teresat: Merci Teresabarbi 1 02-09 04:28
To wackymob: Thank you!barbi 1 02-09 04:27
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Ciao Barbara, lovely composition with nice little girl, breautiful perspective, splendid light, excellent clarity and wonderful colors, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2013-02-07 15:04]
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Hello Barbara,
You have certainly caught this young girls mood,she's on a break & is really focused on what the other children are doing while she is away from the action.Your depth of field allows us to see all the action in the background,without it competing with your main subject in the foreground.Your main subject is tack sharp & pops out at the viewer,youv'e made her command our attention.Well taken. TFS

  • tribord Gold Star Critiquer [C: 85 W: 91 N: 296] (895)
  • [2013-02-07 19:08]
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Bonjour Barbara,

Bon cadrage et bon choix du panoramique ici. L'arrière-plan est bien "flouté" et fait ressortir la jeune fille.
A mon goût, tous les autres gens sont idéalement bien placés et contribuent à l'atmosphère. Sauf... Sauf cette pauvre maman dans le coin haut à droite. Le rouge ressort trop et en est dérangeant, et surtout, tu l'as décapitée!
Dommage, car le bleu de la poussette se mariait bien avec celui du maillot de la fille...
La prochaine fois, tu crieras à la maman de bien vouloir se casser du cadre car elle fait tâche... (Oh! le méchant!)

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2013-02-08 1:03]
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nice shot
good pov
good composition
well done

ola Barbara
he little lady pose is fantastic...a good focus of a very feminine young lady. Delicieux petit moment.
um abraço

Hi Barbara,nice pov with the girl sitting off on the corner watching everything going on. Nice to still be able to see what she is looking at. Fiona

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