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Feuilles mortes


Feuilles mortes
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Copyright: Urs Achermann (urs0114) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 672 W: 66 N: 939] (6799)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-22
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: Nikon D700, NIKON 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6 ED-AF-VR, Raw/Tiff
Exposure: f/15.0, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-03-09 2:47
Viewed: 2184
Points: 60
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Feuilles mortes a la dérive dans les eaux du lac Léman.
Objectif Nikkor 80-400 avec un tube allonge Kenko 25mm.
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Hello dear Urs,

Romantic title, excellent shot and POV.
Wonderful colors and sharpness.
Very well done and framed.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2010-03-09 3:50]

A wonderful shot. The sharp detail and vibrant colours are perfectly backdropped by the cool tones of the water.

Très jolie photo les couleurs et le contraste entre l'eau et les feuille bien réussi.
Bonne soirée Marilène.

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839)
  • [2010-03-09 4:14]

What a splendid capture Achermann.
Fantastic colors and great sharpness.
Very effective POV and fine composition

Excellent framing

TFS
JZM

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-03-09 4:29]

Hi Urs,
You are delivering a live capture from these dead leaves floating on the water of the Lake Léman.
Marvellous shallow water with the bottom clearly visible.
Beautiful leaves with different colors adorned with superb light.
A very sharp neat presentation enclosed in this elegant tight black frame.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hi Urs
a beautiful display of leaves on water.
artistic observation and good pp work.
beautiful colors.
nice bg and frame.
greetings
tsilla

Bonjour Urs,

Wow, what a wonderful capture from autumn where autumn colors are so well defined and greatly shown through this pin-sharp work!

Great composition, my friend!

best regards,
Paras

Hola Urs
Bella imagen con un gran contraste de color y formas de estas hojas que parecen descansar sobre este agua transparente , fantastica luz , color y texturas , una hermosa y agradable composicion , felicidades

Buen trabajo
un saludo
Carlos

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-03-09 6:07]

Hi Urs,

The color contrasts are beautiful in this minimalist composition. The leaves are very sharp, and the stones at the bottom are nicely softened, yet sharp enough to create the depth needed for the floating feeling. Different and interesting, TFS.

Best regards,
Werner

Bonjour Urs

Cette composition est incroyable!!!Le relief effacé du fond de l'eau fait ressortir les formes et les couleurs des feuilles...donnant un effet surréaliste!!!
Bravo et merci pour le partage!!
Catherine

Hello Urs,

Exquisite.

Regards,
Siddhartha

Ciao Urs, lovely composition with wonderful dead leaves, splendid warm colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-03-09 12:56]

Bonsoir Urs!
A wonderful image. The vivid colours are incredible!
Great details and clarity ....I can imagine the water transparency....it seems a tropical sea :-)
Bonne soirée.
Ciao! vanda

Hello Urs!
Great focus on the floating leaves and wonderful colours in your picture!
Well done!
Best regards!
Lili

Bravo Urs , voilà une image délicieuse dans toute sa simplicité , une saturation parfaite des tons ici , un contraste solide et du détail à profusion , bien réalisé et un grand merci mon ami,
Carol

Bonsoir Urs,

De feuille à feuille que peuvent-elles bien se raconter en nageant au fil de l'eau...
des histoires d'été où chacune faisant de l'ombre était leur priorité!!!
Ici, chacun sa chacune, plus petite que soi,
la petite jaune a choisie la platane toute retounée, tandis-que l'autre converse déjà avec l'érable sans dessus-dessous aux 12 pointes.
En bref c'est une jolie poésie que tu as composée avec un oeil averti.
Mes compliments, c'est quand même beau la vie, quelque-part, l'éternel recompose Dame-Nature.
Amitiés.
Yolande

PS : hi! hi! j'espère ne pas m'être trompée pour le nom des feuilles.

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3311 W: 1066 N: 5188] (23042)
  • [2010-03-09 21:03]

Bonjour Urs,
Parfaite illusion d'une image en 3D.
Belle vibrance avec la saturation des couleurs. Le contraste chaud/froid donne une grande énergie à l'image. Excellent travail! Annie

Bonjour Urs,

Beautiful composition.
Excellent sharpness and lighting.
Colors are wonderful and perfectly shown.

Best regards,
Tatjana

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2010-03-10 3:19]

Hi Urs,
I like the colours in this shot, the dark of the bottom of the pool is a great contrast to the colourful leaves. Nice job. Best wishes
Bri

Ciao Urs,


Dead leaves floating, as if they were being taken to heaven!
The green water is fabulous, super crystal clear
transparent!
Sharpness and clarity are superb.
Composition and presentation are excellent.

Best regards,


Sergio

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 854 W: 5 N: 1570] (6756)
  • [2010-03-10 13:14]

Hello Urs!
Well taken and wonderfully composed image!
Perfect colours,clarity and details!Romantic
title!Nicely displayed!
TFS Kostas

Hi Urs!
Excellent composition,wonderful colours and light,beautiful job.
Greetings
Tadeusz

Olá Urs

Bonita foto destas folhas sobre a água,
ganharam um efeito interessante; boa
luz, cores, nitidez e textura.
Parabéns
GA
Vera

Hi Urs,

What a great capture. Very good details and excellent colors on the leafs with a very well chosen frame.
Perfect lighting and a very interesting POV.
TFS.


Best regards,
scubli

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  • hains Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 53 W: 4 N: 95] (4859)
  • [2010-03-11 2:37]

Salut bien Urs

Tout nous fait découvrir de très beaux paysages ainsi que la nature a notre niveau. Voici un exemple riche en couleurs et l`angle permettant de voir les détails des feuilles et les roches.

Mario

Hello Urs,

A most unusual shot where the still water creates a wonderful b/g for floating leaves. It is only the depressed water's surface which reveals the truth about the location of the leaves.
Fine sharpness.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-03-11 4:43]

Hello Urs,

Fantastique tableau, quelle couleur ces feuilles dans la pureté de l'eau, ce beau fond nautrel, une merveille.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1187)
  • [2010-03-11 6:45]

c'est superbe, quelle netteté; on croirait flotter avec elles
les tubes allonges ça se fait plus trop? on en entend peu parler; mais pourquoi investir dans un super objo que macro quand il y a cette solution... enfin pour moi ça marchera pas j'ai un bridge et non un reflex...

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-03-11 16:45]

Hello Urs

A striking warm vs cold color contrast, between the rock flour oolored cyan water, & the red & yellow leaves of Autumn floating on the surface. Good sharpness & saturation. Tfs!

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-03-12 6:59]

Bravo Urs pour cette photo simple mais fantastique! Les couleurs sont absolument extraordinaires sans être trop poussées. Du beau et bon travail! Merci.

Mario

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-03-13 22:42]

dear Urs,
floating autumn leaves look quite like drifting in the clear air without gravity...
the green bottom is maybe the another green planet far from the earth,
imaginative cool water fills this space,
thank you for your beautiful shot,
Akihisa

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
  • [2010-04-28 5:43]

Hi Urs,
very special indeed. the floting leaves are well captured in good sharpness and the river bed makes a lovely background. nice composition with excellent colour contrast.

Regards,
Foozi

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