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Copyright: Michael Dolby (mrmike1935) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4654)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-09-25
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 1100D, Tamron AF 18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 (if) Macro, Digital
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-09-30 3:49
Viewed: 1470
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Walking around Ystad in Sweden, and caught this Lady reminiscing with her Grand Daughter.
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Michael

I like to have a look at your photos, Michael, I do not like them all, but I like to see your observations from the daily life, because you're a narrator.
Here, I really like the reminiscence, it's touching, it's real.
The smile of the grand daughter, a lovely moment well photographed. Great timing.
A beautiful story, indeed.

Hi Michael,
the highlight here is obviously the smile on the girls' face, I would have been tempted to crop out some of the BG, the 2 girls top right seem to catch my eye
cheers
Jack

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