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autumn detail

autumn detail
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Copyright: carme Roura (carmia) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 264 W: 6 N: 149] (3722)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-10-12
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-10-13 7:59
Viewed: 1166
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Fall in the high sea
full of fog and cavities,
the land stretches and breathes,
month will fall leaves.
Pablo Neruda
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Hi Carme

An interesting idea but I do have a couple of issues with it. Firstly, the balance, all the interest is on the left hand side. If some of the right hand side was cropped out, it may improve the balance. Secondly, the depth of field. It's very shallow and most of the image is out of focus. I know its an abstract but I think more of the leaves should be in focus. Lastly, the bright patch near the centre is very distracting.

Please understand that this is my opinion only and many may disagree with me.

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10508)
  • [2017-01-12 22:37]

Nice catch by poetic NTE, beautiful.

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