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Copyright: Ra Fer (ChuFer) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 152 W: 21 N: 15] (450)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2012-02-28
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-02-28 13:03
Viewed: 1228
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Contemplating the life happening .. moments of lights and shades the current ones ... he should acquire major relevancy the moments to reflect .. to collaborate .. to be more human...
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Interesting architectural shot. The prominent play of light and shadow seems to symbolize the interaction between men and architecture. Well seen... This interaction would even have been rendered in a more effective way if the mountains in the background had not been visible, but you dealt well with them in your composition. B&W was an appropriate choice here.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

  • Great 
  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2012-02-28 21:57]

Beautiful play with lines, light and shadow.
Good contrast in this B&W presentation. The man is animating the situation. Very neat work. Perhaps a much higher POV would have been more pleasant and attractive to include the mountains as pointed out by Erik.
Very neat work.

Francis Xavier

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2012-02-29 1:43]

Very nice playing with shadow and lights. With or without that person its a nice shot

Bom dia,

Excellent black and white composition with perfec POV and great DOF.
Love the contrast between lights and shadows.
Bright and sharpness are perfect.

Parabéns!
Sergio

  • Great 
  • mart Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 42 W: 3 N: 33] (1539)
  • [2012-02-29 5:30]

Nice graphic shot! Good choice of the BW. Perhaps the pose of the man could be more interesting... But I like it anyway.
Martina

Olá Ra
Good play between light and shadows...you have a gift to see lines and interesting shapes also you did it always vey well.
Um abraço
teresa

Ciao Ra, lovely B&W composition with fascinating alternating light and shadows, great perspective, very well done my friend, ciao Silvio

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