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River


River
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Copyright: Alban Shkupi (Ilir) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-20 12:48
Viewed: 2053
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
But I remember us riding in my brother's car
Her body tan and wet down at the reservoir
At night on them banks I'd lie awake
And pull her close just to feel each breath she'd take
Now those memories come back to haunt me
they haunt me like a curse
Is a dream a lie if it don't come true
Or is it something worse
that sends me down to the river
though I know the river is dry
That sends me down to the river tonight
Down to the river
my baby and I
Oh down to the river we ride

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  • Great 
  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
  • [2006-11-20 13:19]

Hi Alban,
beautiful shot, both sensual and romantic, I like the different lines organizing your shot, congratulations.
Mary

Hi Alban!
Great shot! Very romantic picture, I like also composition!
TFS
Davis

Hi Alban !
Nice composition and a great mood.Inspired b/w choice.Well done ! TFS
Sorin

  • Great 
  • sak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 354 W: 14 N: 42] (2173)
  • [2006-11-20 14:03]

Hi Alban,
Very good capture of this romantic scene. Well composed. TFS.

  • Great 
  • salmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 752 W: 5 N: 428] (4755)
  • [2006-11-20 14:06]

Hi Alban!
Great compo, inspire a romantic mood...
Good in b/w.
TFS
Mihaela

very moody. very impressive work. as usual. congratulations.

odlicna kompozicija, alban.
dopada mi se c/b fotka, daje nekakvu drugu dimenziju.
odlican crop s drvetom koje daje prirodni okvir.
svaka cast.
pozdrav!
zoran

bodovi sutra

  • Great 
  • miuky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 25 N: 234] (1305)
  • [2006-11-21 13:59]

Hy Alban
A superromantic one...i love it!
Regards, M.

good composition of this intimate moment
B&w works well!
Would have worked better, I think, if the bridge was properly level - but nice work anyway!
TFS
Rew

Hi Alban, very nice shot! Great choice of B&W. Great composition. I would turn it a bit clockwise...for the horizon to be straight... you can frame that! well Done!

See you on TL, Marie-Josť

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