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Past Of Window

Past Of Window
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Copyright: David Lazic (Natasa-David) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 259 W: 55 N: 722] (3840)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-09
Categories: Nature, Architecture, Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-09 0:15
Viewed: 2420
Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 70
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After busy weekend, I almost haven't "felt" at all, I bring you story I had in my mind few weeks ago, and was inspired by few different ocasions. First, one sympathetic movie about ghosts, second, one stressful true story I heard from my friend, and finaly, spooky place I took this PP -ed photo.

This place is located near the house of my grandparents, in Kostolac (about 80 km from Belgrade), and more than 2 decadaes it didn't change at all. It was so dark, usefull, back then like it is now. It's a part of an abandoned Ambulance building that stays there for years, forgotten by almost anyone... but
not me...

Have a nice week!

manujmehta, chrisJ, mbrito, skobek, tanburi, szekelykristof, mi_per, mvdisco, Teresat, XOTAELE, Scharan2, eyesthetix, carifuna07, harpya has marked this note useful
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To M4tej: Sa malim zakasnjenjemNatasa-David 1 02-20 10:31
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...and not by birds..:))They have their home there, I think....

perfect work..yes,look little bit sad,and little bit spooky..but that yellow give some brightness,some joy and some hope to whole story,,,

Perfect work little brother :))

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2009-02-09 0:27]

nice colors
good glow at the edge
well done

  • M4tej Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 212 W: 28 N: 82] (781)
  • [2009-02-09 0:30]
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i like it
but i dont like much of photoshop work tho....
i am fan of natural photos not much changed =))

but IMO this is not bad


hello David
how are you friend?
a highly impressive post
good colours
nice pov
fine placement
nice light and good saturaions
sky is wonderful here

Manuj MEhta

very nice, good work.

Hello David! Wonderful landscape. Amazing trees. Fantastic bird. Good light and contrast. Very original blur. Good work. Good luck!

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-02-09 1:00]

Dobro jutro Prijatelju...
Odlican rad...
Jos jedan moj favorit...

Zdravo Davide
jos jedna od tvojih lepih fotografija,super obrada,ide u favorite...
pozdrav prijatelju.

another grt job David it does look a earie place lots of ghosts stories from here i bet your pp work once again is fantastic
regards bryan

Jako dobro Davide!Pozdrav!A.

hi david

beautiful pp and outcome here the color is exrtraordinary. i like it and the composition also is fine..

well done


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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 796 W: 48 N: 1708] (11179)
  • [2009-02-09 1:35]

ciao david
bellissimo lavoro in HDR
grande scatto

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2009-02-09 1:45]

Hi David

A superb catch of the silhouetted row of birds onthe roof contrasting against the lone bird in the sky top left. Good sharpness & colour. Tfs!

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2009-02-09 4:25]

Hello David
Intense mood in this great dark image, excelent the fire colours and the composition with the top of the house very well positioned under a majestic tree, reminding an ancient existence, and the dramatic sky.
Best regards, mb

Hi David,
sky with fantastic, artistic three-dimensional clouds. Beautiful branches of trees. Calm not battle. Pigeon not eagle. Well done.
Regards - Slawek

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  • b021 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 80 W: 0 N: 48] (1184)
  • [2009-02-09 6:34]

Izvanredan rad Davide ! Odlican kolorit. Toplinu daju i golubovi poredjani po ivici krova.

Pozdravljam te,

Hello David,
Breathtaking technique...
Great artwork
Selahattin E

Hi David,
Impressive PP work with beautiful colours, a a very special mood. The place looks a bit frightening with the sitting birds, it resembles me the movie of 'Jeepers Creepers', I wonder if you have seen it. :)
Anyway, great creation, TFS!

Linda foto David!
Composição atraente e belíssimas cores.
Um trabalho excelente.

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  • mi_per Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 215 W: 27 N: 369] (3825)
  • [2009-02-09 14:39]

Zdravo David:)
Odlican kontrast,divne boje i savrsen pp.
Dobro si iskoristio detalj krova sa ove stare ambulante.
Veoma mi se dopada.

Bonsoir David,
WoW! Beautiful silhouettes of the tree and great composition , supers colors and lovely details of your picture, Amazing light and tone..
I like it ...
all my compliments

Zdravo Davise

Predivno prijatelju

Veliki pozdrav,Braca

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2365 W: 178 N: 0] (32781)
  • [2009-02-09 23:00]

Pozdrav dechki ;)
Ma uvek prelepe fotka pune energije...TFS
J ;)

Hey evo i mene..
Obradio si je za čistu desetku Davide..
bez sumnje, deo krova stare ambulante je učinila svoje ,i ovom radu dala jednu specifičnu atmosferu...
zaista sve pohvale za celokupan rad....sjajno

Hi David, beautiful flying bird in a fantastic composition, wonderful colors, fascinating atmosphere, very well done, ciao Silvio

beautiful image, the dreamy like effect i see always in your imaginative images David,effective combo of colors of the images that tells a story. another work of art.TYFS.

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 77 N: 98] (2228)
  • [2009-02-11 9:58]

Hi David:

Beautiful shot. Excellent composition. I like the color tones, the POV and the birds.
As usual Very nice PP work. The trees are fantastic and what a beautiful sky.
Well done.


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  • Alexia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 0 N: 221] (2466)
  • [2009-02-11 13:34]

Ciao...mi piace moltissimo questa foto
e questa particolare luce
che gli hai dato
la rende magnifica..


Boa noite David

Are you,... and rhe sky, and the birds, and trees trying "trying burn" the ghosts?...
Love the intense colours that change maybe za perfect place.
My regards

Hola David.
Una fantasmagórica imagen.
Buenos detalles y gran encuadre.
Un cordial saludo, JL.

Hello David,
Lehet a kedvencem?
Szia Laci

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  • soe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 381 W: 0 N: 108] (2473)
  • [2009-03-06 6:31]

Hi David
Great artwork with light and color.
Tin Soe

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 294 W: 39 N: 824] (4058)
  • [2009-03-21 0:29]

Hi David,

Very impressive PP work and composition.
Extraordinary colors and mood. Beautiful!!!


Hey David,
The PP worked nicely here.
Excellent 'modelling' and good composition.
Best regards, Daniel

Very pretty place! Nice effct you gave to the shot! Love the blur on the trees, the contrasts!!! We can't see very well the pigeons, but we can discern them on the roof!
Congrats for this wonderful photo like a painting!
TFS< Carine

Ciao David

This post is like a movie scene!
Wonderful treatment and composition,
Everything is beautiful in the post, the colors, the house, the birds
the trees ... whew! ..
Excellent visual and very good taste!


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