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Portrait
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Photo Information |
Copyright: Aleksandar Jovanovic (ackovr)
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Genre: People |
Medium: Black & White |
Date Taken: 2014-03-25 |
Categories: Portrait |
Camera: Nikon D-70s |
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/15 seconds |
More Photo Info: [view] |
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
Date Submitted: 2014-03-26 6:27 |
Viewed: 1777 |
Points: 2 |
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Hi Aleksander
Please understand I'm not an expert on photography, especially portraits. Also these are my opinions only and are meant to be constructive and not malicious.
I think the light is a little flat giving little definition to his face. Also you used a focal length of 26mm which has made his arm look too big and would also slightly distort his face. I believe a focal length of about 50mm is best. Also there are no catch lights in his eyes which make them look a little lifeless.
I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop just to see if I could improve the photo somewhat.