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Copyright: Jose m brito e silva (mbrito) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-08-22
Categories: Food, Mood
Camera: Sony DSLR Alpha-100, Sony 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Zoom
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): mbrito back in time, by himself, Friday Theme 2010-10-08 Addiction/Addict [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-10-08 14:17
Viewed: 2185
Points: 12
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a contribution to the Friday themes...
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To shelbeesmom: Thank you my friendmbrito 1 10-08 14:26
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Excellent Jose! Very well done! I totally understand Addiction! This is nice in BW, it has more impact than color! Hope you can quit soon, but I would keep that fancy lighter!
B-)
Linda

Great details with the message RELAX. BR JV

I can't call it as in the title... Missing element pointing the addiction out. This photo says: "A man drinking and smoking" That's all. No further story... (written by a 28 years smoker who quit smoking 8 years ago...)

Olá José, está bem dentro do espírito de um tema dificil, que foi muito bem escolhido pelo David porque pungente. Abstraio-me e contemplo sua foto (afinal é por isso que estamos aqui) que é extremamente bem composta e lhe dou meus cumprimentos.
R.

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-10-09 5:47]

Hi Jose,

A simple, yet effective depiction of at least two addictions. The one to the left I am very familiar with ;)

I like the timing to catch the way brandy tends to run down the sides of a snifter after a sip. Well done, and a good contribution to the theme.

Regards,
Werner

Hello, Jose -
I love the feel and atmosphere of this image; the glass and ornate lighter are in sharp focuse while the hand of the smoker, balancing the image, is softer; the smoke curling out of the end of the cigarrette is a nice touch. Great idea to use monochrome, which enhances the classic feel. Excellent.

I do relate to this very much Jose. A smooth, moody, and graceful depiction. It looks so good in that chosen tone. Good work MF.

Danilo

Hi Jose,
Nice presentation of the lighter,cup of wine and hand with a cigaret on a table,
I like the black & white and beautiful contrast of light,
a well done composition.
Michel

Nice mood with this Jose - fits the theme perfectly! I like the simple composition with the focus on the glass and lighter...

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 639 W: 205 N: 43] (1347)
  • [2010-11-20 15:38]

A very nice and moody picture ! A very nice light to make soft tones and to give an atmosphere !
Kind regards
Jean

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