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Copyright: Iwona Trapczynska (Iwon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 99] (8183)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-08-13
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-08-21 5:24
Viewed: 901
Points: 14
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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2013-08-21 7:39]

I like the way you have concentrated on the shadows rather than the subject, neat job.


Hi Iwona
nice beach scene with only play of bird shadows on the sand. original approach.


Very interesting observation of shadows, well framed.
Artistic way to photograph the beach.

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2013-08-21 11:27]

Vibrant & interesting beach scene Iwona,I wonder if all of one gull,the one near the top centre,were to be shown fully & the other two top right, were to be removed,it would make much difference to your composition or not? No matter I like the uniqueness of your composition showing off the 'gulls shadows as the main subject.TFS



Hello Iwona, an unusual picture deciding to concentrate upon the shadows of the gulls; it works so well.
I think that I would have cloned out the 'real' birds, so that the composition would be...sand, sea and shadows.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Ola Iwona
Full of charm of beauty shadows
um abrašo

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  • przem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 68 W: 0 N: 6] (719)
  • [2013-12-26 10:17]

znowu spytam - czym zrobione?
Ciekawe ujęcie, choć ja pewnie obciąłbym gˇrę, tam gdzie widać "tych co cień rzucili". Ale to zapewne kwestia gustu.
pozdrawiam ciepłym grudniem

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