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Copyright: Pawel Murczak (paweljg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 301 W: 56 N: 1149] (8770)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-04-09
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Decisive Moment, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D, Kingston SD 2Gb, 52mm HOYA UV filter
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-04-18 13:51
Viewed: 1798
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Street stories seen at 50mm in Wroclaw city.

Last hours in old railway station in Wroclaw. On 10.04.2010 was closed and began big make-over for football EuroCup2012.

Critiques and comments are welcome,

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-04-18 15:03]
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Hi Pawelig,

It's a good B&W shot with good light and placement off center of the old man.
I did a simple WS because I would like to see the photo cutting off the part on the left and slightly below.
Hope you give your opinion about it.

Best regards,

I like this! Poignant, personal, you caught him off guard! LOVE the BW conversion here!

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839)
  • [2010-04-18 22:20]

Hi Pawel
Its a fantastic B&W with lovely hint of fine grains.
The composition is excellent and i really loved the extra room at left.
My only critique is, if u were able to control the highlights at left top which is actually blown out details and doesn't suits to the overall feel of this beautiful B&W.

May be HDR would have done it for u??


A poignant scene, excellent choice for b&w.
I'm touched. I like the title and the street stories.
A decisive moment well observed and framed in my opinion.

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