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In the wind

In the wind
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerzy Cierpicki (skorpion13) (924)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-07-26
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/inf, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): II :::Polki:::Polish Girls:::, portraits, FAVORITE b/w portraits, 100 women, 100 models, I have loved on TL [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-29 6:04
Viewed: 2655
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 47
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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 195 W: 4 N: 64] (587)
  • [2008-01-29 6:09]

An excellent photograph of an amazing beauty. I love the pose and the tight crop and although the composition is very central, I don't find this being a problem. Outstanding modeling there, with a look that pierces through the computer screen. A note is always appreciated.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2008-01-29 6:13]

Hi Jerzy...
Welcome to TL!
This is a beautiful B/W photo!
Very nice portrait - obviously sweet and cute..!
Well done, well presented...
Rgd. George

Thats the perfect moment! Its a beautiful photo. I like it in B/W. The model is also a beauty.

no fajnie ta sesja poszla :-)
bardzo fotogeniczna modelka, no i wpadla w dobre rece.

Siema Skorpion! Sliczna dziewczyna (ma jakos na imie?), sliczny portret. Rewelacyjne swiatlo, ruch, dobra ostrosc. Fantastyczne zdjecie.
3maj sie!

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2008-01-29 7:09]

Beautiful portrait...
Amazing beauty...

Very good picture even in b/w. I found the centering ineffectual but a good shot with nice sharp eyes and lips, good lighting. TFS

I do really like the movement in this picture.



Hi Jerzy,

This is a very beautiful model. I love this in B/W, I also love her eyes you have managed to bring them up nice and sharp.



Witaj Jurku
kolejny świetny klasyczny portret, rewelacyjna poza, przepiękne, spokojne spojrzenie, znakomity nastrój...świetny obiekt fotografowany...

Superb! Just everything. Like it very much.

good again
the wild hair is great too
still good photojob
keep posting

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2008-01-29 18:08]

Beautiful portrait! Her eyes are amazing! I like it very much.This is very well composed and the model is very nice.TFS!

Druga z Twojej serii ładna, naturalna portretówka.
Większość osób, która ostatnio wystawia tu swoje portrety powinna się od Ciebie uczyć...

very nice portrait. Love the composition and the eyes are nice as well. I like her expression too.

Hi, Jerzy!

Charming model, nice composition.


Widze ze nowy uczestnik Trek lens;)
Witam i gratuluje super wejscia:d
Ladna dziewczyna super punkt widzenia i wiaterek:)
Ale jak bedziesz robil zdjecia tylko modelek to bedzie monotonne z mojego punktu widzenia!!

Superbe composition aidée en cela par un modčle exceptionnel de beauté....


Very beautiful model, her eyes are delicious and you shot her explaining her soul.
I just looked at your gallery and I find your portraits really well composed.
Best regards
Ciao, Antonella


Very very wonderful portrait!!! Good DOF and POV!
She is beautiful and have a amazing eyes!


More than beautiful. Beautiful girl with moody style,

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 17 N: 295] (2116)
  • [2008-08-13 3:53]

This is a very soulful photograph. The selection B/W for the image was an excelent choice. She looks confident but somehow vulnerable. Overall, the photograph is a very successfful portrait of a very beautiful woman.

Muy buena fotografia y hermosa modelo. Lo mismo, sin datos de tus lentes, pero buena imagen. :)

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  • Friso Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 4 N: 12] (147)
  • [2009-05-12 11:08]

She is a heavy smoker isn't she? Like the picture better without this nicotine look. Great DOF, great background.

Rgds, Paul

  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2012-02-10 14:47]

Just beautiful.
Just excellent portrait.


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