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Copyright: Jacek Madej (Jaku) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 1 N: 0] (402)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 20D
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-28 20:10
Viewed: 1234
Points: 4
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  • Great 
  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 12 N: 62] (421)
  • [2007-04-28 23:08]

The crop here is very good. Her expression is good, too and the detail is fantastic. I would, however, have moved the light to a different angle. Right now it bounces off her face and her skin is glowing in an unattractive way. Maybe this can be changed in photoshop. I would increase the contrast a bit. Good try! Actually, it is a lot better than a try! Just a couple of flaws that can easily be fixed but that don't really stand out that much as it is. Great portrait!

  • Great 
  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 933 W: 14 N: 1331] (7535)
  • [2007-04-28 23:08]

Beautiful model and a beautiful pose. Great pov and nice sharp details and tones. Very nice lighting. TFS

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