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Copyright: Jacek Madej (Jaku) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 1 N: 0] (402)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 20D
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-25 16:34
Viewed: 1575
Points: 8
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  • KellEy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 48 N: 172] (2098)
  • [2007-04-25 16:41]

The light is very flattering and the model is very pretty.
I think a bit more arm and torso (to show the ends of her hair) would be nice.
Also (just a nik-pik) her expression is kind of...well...snobby. A funny title could have explained this.

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  • mansua Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 613 W: 31 N: 23] (2117)
  • [2007-04-25 19:29]

Muy bello retrato de un muy bello rostro.
Excelente le manejo de la luz y la composición.
Felicitaciones Jacek.

Ania - bardzo ladna. Zdjecie OK
Pozdrawiam, Krzysztof

Hi Jacek,

I realy like the gradient light in the background.
Very well done on that!
You have chosen a lovely model and she realy is good: looking straight in the cam and she's pretty.
I think I would like to see more of her torso too or less of the background...
I've looked at it: crop off the whole left side, right in the model's hair.... make it a square image....
Maybe it's not a good idea at all, but it may be worth a try.. just to see what the result is...

But... I realy do like this image as it is...
I think it's a nice portrait!


P.s.: bck with :)

Pretty model, good lighting

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