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Photo Information
Copyright: Barbara Was (modliszka) (1360)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08-09
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-08-13 9:46
Viewed: 1137
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 15
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hi barbara,
nice oloring and composition,
great cropping
tfs
stefaan

I made you a workshop hope you like it

a hard crop on the forehead leads us straight to the eyes...some hair would have been acceptable
slight sharpening is possible but on a lady not always desirable unless you use a soft focus filter with the hole in the middle...forgot what that was called..
good skin tones and most of all
the sitters expression and invitation to know them...one can ever know the true personality of the sitter but can convey a pleasing one with guise.
cheers
geof

ps did a w/s...still not happy with that hard forehead crop...sorry..its your portrait and my w/s may be way out of line but i tried to warm the skin..remove the texture but keep the eyes sharp and most of all ...alluring and compelling..no b-w i am afraid

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 39 N: 196] (3627)
  • [2006-08-13 10:22]

very nice photo. excellent clarity!

tet

Witqm,
swietnt kadr, bardzo dobry portret.
pozdrawiam
Basia

1 word, FANTASTIC!

Ben.

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1049 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-08-13 17:56]

Fajowe.
Tomek

oczy tak jak by nie twoje - twarz bardzo plastyczna - dla mnie za malo naturalne - choc z drugiej strony cos w tym jest

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2006-09-04 23:00]

tight framing and square orientation is what makes this a great photo!

also the color is great! the eyes beautiful! and the photo a masterpeice!

one of your best works barbara!

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