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amber-green portrait


amber-green portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Irek Buchbach (gudhjem) (817)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-20
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-23 9:05
Viewed: 1740
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 18
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hiheyulaa 1 04-23 09:44
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Hi Irek,

Very beautiful portrait, the colour reproduction is superb, great lighting and nice eye contact.

Regards
Wayne

good portrait.
goood lighting
good colours
good eyes..but face expression is not so good
good cropping
good frame

sangeeth

Yes, I like the green. I like the nice compo, the crop and the overall colour balance as well. A good one.

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  • L810th Gold Star Critiquer [C: 108 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-04-23 9:26]

Hi! Irek,
I have just found your work and like alot of other Polish photographers here and on TE, I do enjoy their work. Active or Passive, I do not expect any return visits here, but I know when I see good work I want to praise it. This is probably the best piece IMO. and you have a lovely model who comes over in this shot so well like a still from an old 50's movie.
My only criticism is that right hand edge being not vertical and I would have darkened out the scratches and the hand highlight so as not to distract. Also the LH side needs more cropping IMO.
Lovely work indeed!
Mike.

nicely done portrait, Irek. i love the intensity in her eyes as she was looking at you. ROn

I like the look in her eyes. Then add the composition, good focus and colour choice throughout and you have a very good portrait. Well done
Andrei

Green eyes, green shirt with greeny background. Great combination of all these and orange scarf.
Very nice, Irek.

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  • mrcrow Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 179 N: 78] (2714)
  • [2006-04-23 12:15]

cool hand position as if she is holding up the frame..:)
brilliant colour tensions here green blue brown and blue..
the eyes have it..
you could have gotten this larger for more impact but as it is it certainly catches the eye.
cheers
geof

bardzo sie podoba!!!! barvo!

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2009-02-02 5:09]

nice portrait
good colors
lovely girl
well done

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