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Ryniu
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Copyright: Barcio Ddd (Tytus) (39)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-10
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/5.6, 4 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-08-15 4:44
Viewed: 2090
Points: 7
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nice play with the lines of this bench, dynamic compo of an immobile subject, well done
regards
jo

Hi Barcio
the effect of light is good
The bench in foreground is really very nice.
Welcome on TL
Ciao
Later

Hi Barcio,
the mood with the warm glow of light is interesting. I also like what you did with the lines of this bench.

But I think it could have been much sharper and had much greater impact and appeal.

If you shoot this again, try a really small aperture - something like F/14 (or smaller F/16..etc - if your camera can manage that) and see what happens.

That assumes of course that you hold the shutter open for longer. Use of tripod goes without saying.
Happy shooting.

best regards, Daniel.

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  • Qba Silver Workshop Editor [C: 6 W: 0 N: 1] (113)
  • [2008-08-17 12:54]

No barcio tu masz zasłużonego + za Światełko bo bardzo fajne :)
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