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Photo Information
Copyright: lila foureur (lila) (2)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2002
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2017-09-23 6:12
Viewed: 736
Points: 8
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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2017-09-23 23:10]

Hi Lila and welcome to TL
A very interesting image that works well in your B&W conversion.
There are a number of distractions for me though... The frame is too heavy and perhaps the black should be a grey tone picked out of the image and semi-opaque. Secondly, I think the image would work better if the houses were a little lower to centralise the symmetrical shapes in the image - maybe crop some of the water to even the symmetry and make the image look more like a wider shot?
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing.

Good morning Lila, a very well come to TL:-)
What a lovely first work by art and perspectives also reflection, indeed geometrical artwork BRAVO LILA FOUREUR

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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
  • [2017-09-26 12:16]

Interesting the negative appearance.

Welcome Lila,
Yes this negative reflection is very "positive" ...for me !!!
Very interesting !!
Welcome !

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