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Copyright: Geir Halvorsen (damiel) (16)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-01-13
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-13 12:32
Viewed: 1934
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My girlfriend, talking on the phone, and the light came so nicely onto her face
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To chiaraluna: Thank you!damiel 1 01-13 14:58
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Welcome to TL Geir :-) very nice first post.. the light is indeed wonderful and her position and look while on the phone very intriguing.. great job ^_^

i did a little workshop to see how it would look framed.. hope you dont mind..

take care,

Hei Geir,
En fin start i TrekLens, velkommen!
Jeg er enig med deg om lyset... fremhever profilen selv om bildet er tatt rett forfra... grei komposisjon, selv om jeg kanskje ville vurdere en ikke-sentrert løsning? Du kan gjerne utnytte formatbegrensningen ved å legge ut noe større bilder!
Pablo -

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer [C: 898 W: 10 N: 98] (475)
  • [2006-01-13 13:47]
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hei hei,
You know.. in a way I'm very glad that you cannot see the phone in the picture. And.. if you could get rid of the line of the girl's arm/shoulder on the left side of the picture she will realy fade into the background.
Very good picture!

Wonderful light and expression; very good Geir. Welcome to this great place!

Very nice and restful portrait Geir...great use of light.


Excellent control of light Geir. Welcome to TL.


Hi Geir,

You are right. It is a very pleasing image. I like the light and shadows.



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