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A tough environment......!!

A tough environment......!!
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-10
Categories: Artwork, Friends/Family, Mood
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-15 1:13
Viewed: 3053
Points: 24
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"We want a tough photo, in a tough environment...",my brother says. So we tried....

The tough environment was not so difficult, but now the pose and the look... We want to seem tough, but how do you do that??!!

Haha...I hope you can see the problem. If you ARE tough, than its not hard to stand tough and look tough. But if you are NOT.......than the smile is still nice and the look is still loving....

So, we choose to go for the tough environment and a little bit in the pose, but not for the tough look.

All set?? Klik, klik, klik.....

The photo: Some clarify, neat image and frame...

Have a nice weekend,

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To fotobram: white shoes..Jan 1 02-28 00:45
To korbee: Leuke mensen...Jan 3 12-15 10:31
To Kaliakar: tough!!Jan 1 12-15 01:23
To hamperium: buizen...Jan 1 12-15 01:17
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dexe is erg mooi
vooral de kleuren
de buizen hebben hier ook een functie

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2007-12-15 1:19]

Beautiful fashion shot...
Nice composition and colors...
Greetings from Montenegro...

Nice scene, beautiful image, but indeed they could look a bit more tough!!!;-)

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2365 W: 178 N: 0] (32781)
  • [2007-12-15 1:30]

Hi Janneke ;)
very nice, art, impressive photo...TFS
J ;)

Looks like a CD cover ... the rock-star style ... but as you say, they couldn't quite get the tough expressions.
Nice textures and light here though, this is good work.

great photo. nice colour, idea and composition.

Leuke mensen Jan,maar hier word ik niet echt vrolijk van ...

wat een mooie plaat janneke

good quality, fine colours, framing, poses, well composed ;)

Hi Janneke!
Very nice story you told us.
I like pp work.

Hoi Janneke,
Een hele stoere plaat man! Top hoe je "modellen" poseren en de omgeving? ..helemaal top. Heleder en scherp ook nog eens.

Not really tough, but a nice colorful picture.
(The white shoes do not match the 'tough' muddy environment)

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 39 N: 196] (3627)
  • [2008-03-07 11:56]

Hi Jan,

i like the cool effect on the image. clean and sharp.

all the best,


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  • x-ray Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 38 W: 69 N: 3] (163)
  • [2008-03-12 13:34]

Hello Janneke
Found your pictures today and particularly liked this one. I like the lighting composition of the shot. I wonder if tough is your aim if a starker B+W treatment would have the desired effect just a thought
Regards Kenny

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