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Can you read my mind.....?

Can you read my mind.....?
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-10
Categories: Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-12-10 3:47
Viewed: 3127
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Can you read my mind....?
What am I thinking of...?
Does she want me...?

My favorite couple for making photo's, my brother Alex and his girlfriend Simone.
We had a family gathering at my house and we had a great time! And at the end of the day we wanted te do what we really like te do..... just making photo's!!

We went for the building that we use very often for making photo's. It's close to home and really beautiful. There is one thing...it's surrounded bij fences and barbed wire!!! So if we want to make photo's, we have to climb over it...:(

But its worth it!! There is great graffiti overthere and that give a beautiful background and a great mood!

About the photo: I changed the colours (saturation), did something with the graffiti :) and cropped it.

Have a good day!


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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2007-12-10 3:50]

Excellent piece of work !


Great candid.

A great compo Janneke! Love the colors and the graffiti on the background wall and great expressions on your model's faces.
Very nice work indeed!


well framed, interesting wall in BG and the pose captured, good sharpness too, nice photo

Hi Jan....



jean paul

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer [C: 124 W: 54 N: 132] (1248)
  • [2007-12-10 12:27]
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Nou, wilde nog even wachten met reageren. Maar doe het toch maar..... HIJ IS FANTASTISCH!!!
Ben er echt heel blij mee! Was zelf ook weer bezig... heb nu paint shop pro x2!!! Echt heel gaaf!!
Had dus ook vandaag een foto op TL gezet maar die kwam daar heel anders uit,... beetje vreemd....Je ziet vanzelf wel iets verschijnen.

-x- Alex

Well very nice picture!!!! Lovely expression and nice background. Only the pipes I don't like that much there.
For the rest perfect.

lekkere scherpe foto en de grafitti werkt erg goed
mooie atmosfeer ook.
vind persoonlijk alleen de pijpen die daar liggen beetje afleiden

hallo Janneke

verry nice POV and..PIcture..

Hi Janneke,
Very nicely and lovely composition.TFS.


Hi Jan,

I like this image than the WS . . colors at the wall are not too dominant . .
Skin tone for both pictures are very natural . .
If you don't mind, I did a workshop . . crop the pipe . .
Lovely couple . .


Many thanks for your kind words on Lili for you .

:-)) will be back this afternoon

good compostion, expressive one like a photo clip from a movie,sharp well detailed Janneke. well done.
regards from Dubai.........andres

Hi, this is a great double portrait - first I had thought that you did not know this couple, now that I read your note, I am even more impressed because they look so natural !
I'll add it to my favourites,

Very beautifully presented. Love the idea. Being shot next to the graffiti makes it even more beautiful.


J'adore ce portrait de couple à la fois contemporain et esthétique.
Cependant, j'ai un petit peu de difficulté avec le regard de jeune fille qui ne semble pas connecter avec celui du jeune homme.
Quand même, elle est magnifique votre photo.

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