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First light

First light
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Copyright: Simone Beijeman (S-moon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 382 W: 97 N: 457] (2844)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-06-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon Coolpix p90
Exposure: f/3.2
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-06-26 12:49
Viewed: 2830
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Everybody,

Today I had a basic training in photography and one of the things was learning about diafragma.
In the workshop you can see the original in a coloured version.
I cloned the background because it was to busy in my opinion. And not as blurred as I wanted.
I used the filter 'Orange' and 'increase red' to get this colourtone and get more contrast.
I had a little trouble with making the photo small (it got less sharp) but I hope it turns out right while uploading.

F-stop 3,2
Shutter speed 1/615 sec
ISO 100

Let me know what you think and thanks for visiting.

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  • Great 
  • Hudda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 17 N: 59] (296)
  • [2010-06-26 13:01]

i like it tht its not centered:)
and awsome PP work
sometimes even lil PP does wonders:)
keep posting
Lost soul

Beautiful image has been recorded
Beauty is Bggrand
Good composition
Good luck

You learn your lessons well, excellent composition! Nice farming with good POV. Well done, tfs.

Hoi Simone,
First light ... with a first shadow.
Mooi belicht. Net niet overbelicht. Geeft een bepaalde atmosfeer op deze manier. Mooi werk.

  • Great 
  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2010-06-26 14:51]

Superb shot Simone, the light and focus makes a brilliant imagcomposition. Nice work. Best wishes

I really like the composition with the large amount of negative space. The subject has a nice light on it that really makes it standout. TFS

Hoi Simone,

This is a nice photography.
The plant is very well positioned in the frame and I like the negative space on the other side.
Beautiful light tones.

Warm greetings and best wishes,

Please don't mind but I like the WS version more than the main picture, Simone!
You did a great job and title really fits to the shot. The picture is razor-sharp and clarity is amazing. The light, as your title says, is the best part of the shot, which gives the flower and green blade-like leaves a divine look. The power of Nature is well captured in this work and you didn't leave any stone unturned to catch this moment professionally.

Well planned and nicely presented work!

Best regards,

This is a wonderful shot full of atmosphere, Simone, so silent and peaceful.
I like the dark BG and the fantastic light with the shadows on the leaf.
Thanks, good work
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2365 W: 178 N: 0] (32781)
  • [2010-06-28 2:08]

Greetings Simone ;)
Original composition...nice feelings, TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

Geweldige bewerking van de foto.
Het origineel was inderdaad te druk, maar nu ligt de totale nadruk op de bloem terwijl je nog goed kunt zien dat ook het licht erop valt.
Prima sfeer met die kleur

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