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DSC 311
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Copyright: Saso Sarakinov (sarakinov) (941)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-01-07
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/25 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-01-07 7:49
Viewed: 1219
Points: 10
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Very good photo.

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2012-01-07 11:11]

Hi Saso
Firstly, where's your notes?
Not only do you have a very beautiful subject to photograph, you have also captured her with a lovely neutral pose. The head scarf wraps her face forming a frame and invites the veiwer into a guessing mysterious guessing game of 'who am I?' 'What am I thinking?' and so on.
The lighting is excellent, not too harsh as you'd sometimes from a flash - I'm guessing this is all natural light? There's no sign in the eys of any flash.
Only one minor criticism from me Sasa, I would have done a little PP work around the eyes - just a small amount of sharpening and level adjustment to brighten the whies of her eyes, being in slight shade has darkend them a little.
Great shot, keep up the good work.
TFS
Dai

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer [C: 898 W: 10 N: 98] (475)
  • [2012-01-07 13:42]

Saso, I really like the contrast between your model and the scarf... nice picture all in all, but I do think that your model is a bit too centered.
If you place your model slightly off-center to the left there would be more excitement in the picture, even if you make this a square shot!
keep up the good work here.... nice one!

Cheers, Anneke

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  • brech Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 135 N: 1111] (3045)
  • [2012-01-07 20:41]

Saso,
A fine portrait that captures the penatrating eyes of your subject
with a soft lighting that appears very natural. Tight composition works very well here.

LAB

I have visited your gallery, and in my opinion, this the best photo you have. I love this kind of composition, with a beautiful young lady wrapped in a nice and colorful piece of cloth. Very natural skin color and eyes expression. Well done. TFS

Lorena

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  • tafa Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 13 N: 181] (1818)
  • [2012-02-03 5:54]

Odlicno !!!

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