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model life
Photo Information
Copyright: Gundega Dege (sundew) (3759)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-02-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Olympus E300
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TL Beautiful, Sensual Shots [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-02-21 5:57
Viewed: 2334
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
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A very graphic picture what is not usual for a portrait ! The choice of the B&W is perfect.

I like the board on the wall !!! --> You should have a look at my pictures entitled "Snow" or "Borther / Sister(s)".

graet b/w photo great pov and composition the texture is amazing i think it is perfect

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  • luisa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 73] (1408)
  • [2007-02-21 6:41]

beautifull composition!! nice choice of the b&w and the photo on the wall is great!!Nice idea!

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Good comp & pose. Great image. Also like the repeating image - very subtle.

Great composition and perspective. Very cool.

-Charlie

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  • femmy (24)
  • [2007-02-21 9:36]

Excellent B/W photo, texture is brilliant! Well done!

great work, very beatifull,

Clara

Wonderful, shot Gundega, I loveit, bravo.

great compo, contrasts, toning and posing!
I love the triangles in the upper squares
nice studio !
stefaan

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121)
  • [2007-03-03 11:07]

A life dedicated to one snapshot on the wall.

I like the use of the triangle on the wall, asociating to a spotlight of reflectors. Repeated similar geometry (legs) is a nice breaker on the bottom, using the straight line of the couch to cut the scene in half and maintain the continuum.

My only nit-pick is the way you captured her face, as if smelling the sweat of her armpits. Not very feminine, i say ...

A.

fantastic shot.you are the best.

Gundega,
Very good control of lighting and placement of model. Very strong image......
Steve

so long legs.. wonderfull idea.. compo.. really good shot!

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2007-05-14 0:21]

Abstract & well present life infinitely.

Wong

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  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 12 N: 62] (421)
  • [2007-05-27 23:43]

One of my favorite photos of yours. What I don't understand specifically is what you are trying to say with "a model's life"? I like the grainy effect you have in this photo, especially the miniature her in a frame above her head. You did that in one of your first photos and though the idea is incredibly artistic I think it turned out better here. Probably because of the triangle ceiling and the pose of the model, it all fits better; a kind of symmetry.

Great work :D:D

aDelicia

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