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hard and soft

hard and soft
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Copyright: Ilfumo Uccide (marcocig) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 464 W: 50 N: 79] (3719)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-07-03
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 300, Nikon AFS DX VR 18-200 f/3.5-5.6 G IF-ED
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-07-23 3:48
Viewed: 2217
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A different portrait, more a cinema frame than a photography. Playing with the focus.
Let me know what do you think about it

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  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2010-07-23 3:56]

Bom dia Marco
you look so great.
I love the scene, very well composed...I would like to tell you that "il gato pardo" come to my mind"...but it was was Polansky my first approach...You are a surprise...and you are great starts of my Universe Tl.
You have a good focus on you...and good action!!!
I love it.
you break my heart:):)
Um abrašo

I love it and I've played with it for an even more cinema feel.

have a life full of love !

Hello Marco,

I love the tight composition and framing of your image. It reminds me the italian photo romans my mother used to read in my childhood.

Unlike Teresa, I am not a fan of the focus here. Too narrow. The lady should be sharper in my humble opinion.

Would also be interesting in B&W.

  • Great 
  • artabb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 341 W: 34 N: 182] (3637)
  • [2010-07-24 12:22]

Great Marco, beautiful graphic composition of the two line crossing. I love the cropping. It adds an extra element of interest and, in a sort way, a very tasteful and discreet touch of intimacy, which almost makes the viewer feel slighgtly inopportune.
You may define it "cinema frame", but I like it very much as it leaves the reportage photography environment and enters the artistic milieu.
I can only give you two points, but it deserves at least 6 points. Arturo

we are so beautiful

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