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Copyright: Ilfumo Uccide (marcocig) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 464 W: 50 N: 79] (3719)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-16
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 300, Nikon AFS DX VR 18-200 f/3.5-5.6 G IF-ED
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-18 13:39
Viewed: 1575
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
First shot with Anna, model for me in a studio session from last saturday
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Hello Marco,

Excellent portrait of Anna (a beautiful model).
I like very much the shadows around her face.
Congratulations and TFS

belle le ombre sul viso , anch eil ritratto Ŕ molto bello, la modella Ŕ scialbina, ma di necessitÓ virt¨ :P

Pretty model. Light could be better balanced - the light-and-shadow are very harsh. With a simple reflector you could soften the shadow by her nose and over her right eye.

ciao Marto..
i have my dubts about shadow on her nose.. it's not me.. it's the abc of tecnichal rules about portraits... i definitely hate rules in general.. and expecially about art!! no rules.. always! ;))
misterious expression in her sight.. and i'm really intriguing for the vivid detail of her insincere lips!.. final result has something ambigous and charming.. a good trial.. i'm waiting for the next one! many thanks
ciao Marco

Beautiful model and nice portrait.
Good lighting, a fine colours and composition.


Boa tarde Marco
Beautiful people...i said...I Like very much the way she looks and pose. Amazing seduction..like an angel. I love it.
Um abrašo

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