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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 461 W: 121 N: 299] (4996)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-13
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Canon PowerShot A70
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-11-19 12:58
Viewed: 2049
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Rain drops told us that is the end of beautyful day in Venice.

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the sprinkle of rains begins
a few drops scatter on the water
and the gondolas tie up
at least i suppose
i like your angle here
maybe it would be nice to see a little bit
more of each gondola near the top
i love the reflection of the buildings
and the strong diagonal from the bottom right corner

Beautiful, Carmela !!!
The reflections of the gondolas in the canal and the raindrops give an irreal aspect and a special atmosphere very specific to Venice.
Another vision of this city I love !
Like your shot on TE in another style.

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  • Mrgud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 127 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-11-20 14:54]

Good one, Carmelita! :)) Only that distract me from joy in this photo is that I sow your Gondola shot before this one and... Just congratulations for you again! :)))) This is excellent shot but one before is unforgivable! ;))

Quite spooky, the tone of the picture is well set.
Welcome to TL Carmela

Definitely like a painting, very tight composition and good balance light and dark areas. I tried to flip it 180 degrees and that also works quite well. You should try it.

a very unusual shot from venice that i find very pleasant indeed;-)

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  • dave (0)
  • [2004-12-09 10:12]

There is something unsettling about the composition. It is both beautiful and worrying .
Venezia in the rain has this effect. You have captured the feeling very well.

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  • freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 47 N: 77] (1909)
  • [2004-12-09 23:41]

Beautiful mysterical compo for the gondos. A lot of atmosphere out of little details. Very well done!

hi carmela
Venice is a very beautiful city but too often underwater
the reflection of the gondoles is splendid.

the climate is correctly translated by the colors.
it is a beautiful photograph

Carmela, beautiful photo and lovely and languid mood in it. I love Venice. When I go I enjoy in getting lost in all the little "calle" (little roads)and abandon myself to dream. I am a bit late here but I've just come across this picture.

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