<< Previous Next >>

Steps Venice Morning


Steps Venice Morning
Photo Information
Copyright: Bill Fitzgerald (macgarret1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 129 W: 0 N: 273] (1359)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-20
Categories: Architecture
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix S7000
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2016-12-19 1:01
Viewed: 1175
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Morning: Going to work? Returning home from work? It's all the same; the steps must be climbed and descended, the canal must be crossed, ordinary, everyday life in the marvellous city, must go on!

Used Graduated Tint.


Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To bobsmith: The Lady on the stepsmacgarret1 1 12-21 03:26
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

  • Good 
  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2016-12-19 14:44]

Hi Bill,
I like the sunlight and shadow of the girl but not keen on the blue area in thr gray sky
Cheers
Jack

Hi Bill

A good composition, but very difficult lighting conditions. With such a high dynamic range from dark shadows to bright sunshine, your camera just couldn't cope. There are some areas of over exposure where detail is lost. This, I think had to be bracketed and the photos merged, to capture it all. I don't think the gradual tint works either. Maybe a conversion to black and white would help?

I hope you don't mind but I'll try a workshop.

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF